beloved has run away on love trip;
lover killed himself for the love in grief;
lustfully this love was
dead alive for nine years;
impotent suicide mind needs swift leave!
-February 04,2019 Chattogram
i like ur satire you burn everyone's fire and at times my desire lovely poem urs entire
Lustful love is not real love! The man shouldn't have committed suicide! Unfortunately he wasted his life on a love that seemed alive, but was dead in spirit! Infidelity in love is often heartbreaking for one who keeps the sanctity of love! We can learn valuable life lessons from this poem!
LUSTFUL LOVE CAN LIVE TOGETHER BUT CAN NOT LIVE LONG! Great deep truth.
No matter the conditions, suicide is not the answer! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Profound poem...... Yes you said it, No one can take it for long.
A beautiful poem dear friend.....I relish the expression rendered in unique style......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lover killed himself for the love in grief...... this usage dead alive is very important in this poem.... dear Mahtab. love your poem as always. tony