Swing Still Swaying Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Swing Still Swaying

Rating: 5.0


swing still swaying
the way it did when i was a kid
riding it high
reaching the skies
pretending i could fly
now its empty
swaying slowly
a ghost from the past
the soft wind blowing
no more being carefree
nothing left to reach for
memories fading
floating quietly by

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zane Lewis 04 November 2011

Love this poem. Memories give the deepest connections.

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Darkangel Flyfree 05 November 2011

Good poem about memories of the past. Sometimes the past can create good poems. Thank you for your comment on my poems.

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Crimson Love 05 November 2011

This poem is truly phenomenal, Your words tantalize the minds whom read it, with imageries so divine, truly a spectacular write.

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Jonny Brackney 25 January 2012

this is my favorite of yours i think

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Kevin East 07 December 2011

Ethereal in feel. The cruel nudge of nostalgia. Short but not sweet...touching memories of many i think. Well done sp

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Biff Mcguire 10 November 2011

Inocence removed, and memories are the food of life. Loved this one!

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Richard McClellan 07 November 2011

Reminds me of the swinging swing in our yard that I put up for my neice KK... Great Poem my friend!

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Kaila George 06 November 2011

This is so true...so many memories...its sad that we grow up to only remember what we had...smiles bravo bravo...love this poem

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