Sweet Poison Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Sweet Poison

Rating: 5.0


sweet nectar upon lips
when placed so gently
a kiss, whispered love
cunning hiss unheard
stolen breath, gasping
charmed by the dance
blinded to the disguise
words alluring, hungry
desire longing for more
gazing into your eyes
lost in a pool of deceit
razor sharp claws hid
paint crimson carvings
caressing weak flesh
drinking sweet poison,
this venom laced love
seals the fate of death
a kiss carved painfully
writing hate upon wrists

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 06 February 2012

Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share.

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Bulletcookie 2017 06 February 2012

Brautwurst all around for all! Powerful medicine SPGrl.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 06 February 2012

Beautiful poem my friend, great write.

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Fiona Eris Strand 14 February 2012

Very descriptive and detailed. I would very much like to read more now.

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Ramesh Rai 14 February 2012

i think poison is always sweet. great write and a nice poem to read.

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Kelly Seale 19 August 2012

Many, who take to the pen, especially young people, young girls... these days, have experienced this very thing! Your words draw out the emotions and pain that you (and them) go through every minute, of every hour, of every day... no end in sight. That's why writing helps, It brings these ugly truths to the surface of the skin- spelling the letters in blood... HELP ME...SAVE ME...LOVE ME. Isn't that what we learn in life? Sometime, the hard way.- Great Ink! -Kelly.

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Deep Mukherjee 17 August 2012

Really Powerful words and expression! ! ! !

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Romeo Della Valle 16 March 2012

Speechless! Beauty and Love filtered through this powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you again for sharing another of your masterpieces with us! Keep it up! Romeo-NYC

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Shadow Girl 11 March 2012

Fantastically beautiful -SG x

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Pheko Motaung 22 February 2012

A masterly performance! Cheers to you!

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