sweet nectar upon lips
when placed so gently
a kiss, whispered love
cunning hiss unheard
stolen breath, gasping
charmed by the dance
blinded to the disguise
words alluring, hungry
desire longing for more
gazing into your eyes
lost in a pool of deceit
razor sharp claws hid
paint crimson carvings
caressing weak flesh
drinking sweet poison,
this venom laced love
seals the fate of death
a kiss carved painfully
writing hate upon wrists
Brautwurst all around for all! Powerful medicine SPGrl.
Very descriptive and detailed. I would very much like to read more now.
i think poison is always sweet. great write and a nice poem to read.
Many, who take to the pen, especially young people, young girls... these days, have experienced this very thing! Your words draw out the emotions and pain that you (and them) go through every minute, of every hour, of every day... no end in sight. That's why writing helps, It brings these ugly truths to the surface of the skin- spelling the letters in blood... HELP ME...SAVE ME...LOVE ME. Isn't that what we learn in life? Sometime, the hard way.- Great Ink! -Kelly.
Speechless! Beauty and Love filtered through this powerful and well crafted write! 10+++ Thank you again for sharing another of your masterpieces with us! Keep it up! Romeo-NYC
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I would like to translate this poem
Your poem sings of love, even venom with, I find no place for hate, keep strong, survive then pure love shall come to be a state of mind, or so I hope..Great write, quite original and powerful, Thank you for share.