The Bridge Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

The Bridge

Rating: 4.3


(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Antonio Liao)

the thundering rain
falls into the pain
do we need more love
to strengthen this glove?

the typhoon flood
smash all the good
do we need more care
to measure this scar?

crocodiles, sharks
climb to the village
to seek refugees
how precious their age?

lions, rhinoceros
march to the town
to search some foods
when the sun goes down

is there a distant gap
between the hunted ones
and the wilderness hunters?
we can't find it in the map

is there a crucial problem
between the teacher and student?
why there are so much urgency
and lies inside our heart of gem?

the darker days
will come to us
when sun no more rises
all existences become ashes

the sky turned
as red as blood
we stopped and leaned
feeling unspeakably tired

the personal anguish behind
the agonized figure is reduced
tongues of fire and crisis stretched
nature was screaming in our blood

the dangerous bridge
we all shall in a hurry pass by
can we do it with our edge
fulled with angry, envy, and anxiety?

(inspired by Edvard Munch's The Scream)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 17 December 2008

A lot of good ideas and a very important issue/subject to consider.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 15 December 2008

Great write! I had enjoy reading it.

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Kite Remedy 15 December 2008

It gives me thought bout how those animals lessen since human hunts them down.. I might not captured the essence of your poem, but it is beautiful. Nice writing..

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Joseph Poewhit 15 December 2008

It's been going on like through out history. Man's nature won't change till the end and Judgment Day of GOD.

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 14 December 2008

This is all our doing, and we shall all have to pay the price, and we cannot bargain, for we have plundered. Well said.

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Louis Rams 29 August 2009

if the hunter becomes the hunted, then i think it's time that we pray to god above for his protection and his love.

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Antonio Liao 25 May 2009

you have seen the meaning of life....you have felt the breathe of the air and you have reveals the essence of a poet....may your tribe increase and bless your future....thank you and God bless....my sincerest appreciation.... your poem makes the world happy...God speed

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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

A lovely poem................

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Cheung Shun Sang 25 December 2008

Bridge to Eden can help. batch of files can work-Ok

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Antonio Liao 18 December 2008

at least in my life.... you have thought me....the bridge....that we used to pass-by is the place we have to take and live...till death..... it is the avenue to a place that we have to consider.... of what place we desire to live.... thank you... you have change my simple thought...to grow more......God bless

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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