I saw yr reflection in the brook nearby
The soft waters went over my toes
As they remimded me of yr touch
But that was long ago
And now, I take a lock of yr hair and toss it
In the waters
At the end of the day, I continue to watch it
Floating away
Until I sawyr reflection in the moonlight
With tears in yr eyes
A break up is always sad and tearful. Very well expresses Lee Ann. Full Stars
Somehow sometime connections between the self and another cannot be broken. That brook is a great reminder. Fantastic verse, LeeAnn.
A beautiful poem with compelling images. Very touching.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A painfully beautiful poem about one of life's saddest events. If we can learn from that sadness, life can become an enlightening stream of consciousness.