The Conference Of The Nightingales Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

The Conference Of The Nightingales

Rating: 4.9


what pleasures could we need?
whose The Empress we served?
where real joys our soul mates were?

with the love of beloved children
we'll decorate the most splendid sun
we'll recite the divine magnetic verses

our wishes are heavy with many sparkles
like ripe moon bearing down the crystal lake
that flies across to Greenland, and sings aloud

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Antonio Liao 11 January 2010

now the refreshing poem, stated to sings its tune...such a poem that brings pleasure to the mind....God blesses this poem...a 10 +++++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 11 January 2010

The love of a child is more sacred and pure

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Lynn Glover 11 January 2010

I like it Ahmad, A very intellectual poem, you have become a nightnegale as your pen brings us the words of the empress you serve. Very good a 10. Your friend Lynn

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 11 January 2010

Oh my, my, my, no need for questions...nightingale your words serve your Empress well and bring real joy to her soul-sing on through the New Year. Thanks for inviting me to read your '3' Great work 10+++

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Merna Ibrahim 11 January 2010

Nice poem indeed, I like the remarkable title too :) ! If you want, read and comment on my newest poem'Utopia' Thanks for sharing...

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Obinna Eruchie 20 February 2010

I like the concept of this poem, it is artistic.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 16 January 2010

Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for your invite, Liked the poem for its originality and the universal intellectual message.Highly rated. Request you to read and comment upon my poem 'A MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR' Rajkumar

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Anthony Foster 12 January 2010

The pleasure in servitude, Comes to meet the art and skills within, It is in the beauty of knowing thine art, Against the vulgar naked greed that lies within.

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Ruerd Visser 12 January 2010

A real pleasure to read. do go on.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 January 2010

oh how good! kudos sir!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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