over the Mountains of the Ocean
what more miraculous thing may be whispered
that wave which all things melts should soften desires
when the whirlpool doth flow
the Secret was kept tight
that can guide but One
but always have a vast vessel
and just going round and round
and adoring the Mermaids with Love
Since this piece is written in profound thoughts we have to carefully analyze what the author mean in reference to his one step beyond thinking. I mean he's probably a couple of steps ahead of what his readers were about to say. 'Mountain of the ocean' this description is splendid and brilliant. You could imagined a Mt. Everest under the Atlantic or Pacific Ocean. Yeah, right! This work is full of imagination.10+
I've read all three of your conference poems and they sparkle from the heart to the nightengale to the whale. I enjoyed them all. Good use of the pen. Thanks for the invite. I invite you to read any of mine. Your frind Lynn
A poem with high imagination bringing mermaids into the picture.
Dear Shiddiqui, Thanks for the invite. I liked your trilogy of conference and commented and rated them all. In this particular poem I like your use of imagination as a nature lover.Nicely described in free flowing verse..Highly rated. Please read and rate my poem 'wall' which s based on demolition of Berlin Wall. Rajkumar
The Blue Whale is the largest animal to have inhabited this planet, I am in awe of these large magnificent creatures, In my life I just wish I could witness seeing this magnificent plaget, If we allow these animals to become extinct on our watch, Then we are stupid and not worth a mention on the record of eteternity
is this a free verse? well if it is, it is nicely penned... but if it's not well it is still nicely penned... nice write!
it's the calmness of the soul that you show, emulated to follow the foot steps of the breathe of the Whales...so adorable in contain and thought...God bless a 10 +++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Imagery used here is imaginative Ahmad 'the mountains of the ocean' is a beautiful vision to contemplate.10 from Fay.