The Dawn Comments

'O Glorious dawn, we you adore, Equilibrium of universe restore.' Excellent lovely poem on the dawn.10+++

A spiritual reflection of dawn with awesome words. and by awesome i mean it in the original sense. if only i could rise early enough to see it...

A beautiful piece of literature CP, Your dawn is a promise of rebirth regards Bob

A marvellous write C.P. Each new dawn brings countless new possibilities. Your words show great empathy for the earth and hope that a new dawn will begin a time of healing for the this place where we all live. Excellent poem, my friend. A 10 indeed. Best wishes. Richard

A hymn to the glorious dawn...Great composition here sir.10+++

This is one of your best work, sir 10 all the way

My favourite time of day, the sun rising on different world, a new day, new avenues to explore, how exciting! A heart lifting poem.

An excellent piece of write having universal tone. Great words of wisdom and consoling effects form a homogeneous structure in this poem, yet so liquid, so soft and offers a dawn of hope to the world.

A wonderful and uplifting poem. Best wishes, Andrew

Really the dawn touched me.

very beautiful thanks for sharing 10

Hope this is the ' Dawn of the cleansing '.Hail the Universe.Well done Sharma.

Lovely poem CP dawn is a wonderful time of day, Happy New Year to you too Lynda xx

Good heart broods white hopes and sheds source of its beauty upon others.

Light was the first thing spoken into existence. A beautiful lyric. You are a true singer. Warmest regards, Sandra

Ancient wisdom re imparted my friend

We rarely see the sun; but your beautiful description of the dawn has brightened my day. Thank you. Irene

Poem reaches some real high notes of verbiage