Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 288 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

The Evergreen Remains - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Under an olive tree
On the shore of sea
Hand in hand eye in eye
We used to sit, long back
My baby and me..

Through those year long tracks
Resting on the memory yacht
My mind sails towards that shore
Where we had a romantic role...

I behold the shore, the sand and sea;
Behold the well grown olive tree
Behold the waves that alone seem
To sing a different note in glee

I wanted to search the remains
Of romance we left over in the air;
Searching the tree the sand and shore
I could find them, right up there...

The new leaves; I could feel in them
The remnants of our love; their rhythm
I could hear, the one time songs, sweet
Fresh and lush in green, in them in repeat...

3rdApril 2008


Comments about The Evergreen Remains by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (8/18/2009 9:55:00 AM)


    What a peaceful poem. I find it amazing how some birds mate for life. Surely they would write such a poem too..if they wrote. (smile) (Report) Reply

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  • (8/10/2009 9:15:00 PM)


    was a like a song in the sea shore...brought to me memories of the past...beautiful very romantic....10 (Report) Reply

  • (3/15/2009 10:56:00 AM)


    very romantic, nostalgic poem Kesav. its so beautiful going down memory lane and try to recapture those utterly blissful momemts of first flush of love. its very lyrical in content and composition. loved it 10


    Mamta
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  • premji premji (3/13/2009 2:11:00 AM)


    ruins of love....................... (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2009 11:19:00 PM)


    its a wonderful piece abt one's love and sweet rememberence abt the air that fills the environ of the special moments one spend! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2009 5:45:00 AM)


    the memories of love are always evergreen......a beautiful write..10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2009 8:29:00 AM)


    Those beautiful moments of intimate love....certainly remains evergreen, through the times.....refreshing our thoughts, re-inventing the lost glory of then innocent love, everytime our mind resorts to its shelter......A superb write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2009 4:25:00 AM)


    wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! u set the mood alright.................beautiful.......... (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (2/8/2009 10:18:00 PM)


    lovely piece..
    beautiful picture...sweet song merging in your piece..
    a wonderful memories....worth remembering until the end of time...
    the remnants are still there...a living remembrance of your yesterdays...
    lovely.....fine flowing piece...refreshing to the heart...
    10+++
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  • (1/15/2009 1:26:00 AM)


    lovely picture..... weaved with loving beautiful words.. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Martyres (1/6/2009 1:11:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem Kesav...very skillful use of imagery... (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2008 8:24:00 PM)


    beautiful poem..
    keep on going friend..
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  • (12/16/2008 4:59:00 AM)


    Reminiscence..sometimes..it numbs the pain we feel inside..replaced by the past memories of freedom of love that was once acclaimed...

    This poem..lifting emotions of longing and passion at the same time..

    Truly a masterpiece!
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  • (12/2/2008 10:26:00 PM)


    wonderful write kesav saab.....how often do we return indeed to places we've shared with loved ones only to be weighed down with sadness and disappointed at the loss of some purity...but youve not let this peice go down that road youve given it an uplifting romance with the olive tree...making peace with your past. (Report) Reply

  • (11/24/2008 10:49:00 AM)


    Both nature and romance cobined

    lovely poem

    :)
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/23/2008 7:05:00 PM)


    Romance & Nature...the dynamic poetic duo...Memories still strong...always alive...like the Evergreen...Excellent penning, my friend. You are indeed a deep-woven writer of the Heart....!

    FjR
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  • (11/20/2008 2:32:00 AM)


    wishful...beautiful..innocent...

    a 10+++
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  • Marilyn Lott (10/25/2008 8:26:00 AM)


    I love the blend of romance and nature - so fresh and sweet. Delicious poem, Kesav, very enjoyable. A '10! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn
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  • (10/19/2008 10:12:00 AM)


    A wonderful love poem with nice imagery.u get 10++ (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2008 5:23:00 AM)


    evergreen lines...effusing the particles of love
    and encircling the spirit with the celestail orb of memories
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 18, 2009


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