The Maker Of The World Poem by Hazel Durham

The Maker Of The World

Rating: 4.9


I see the bluest ocean in my dreams with candy floss clouds
Floating by,
With angels flying, just stopping to bow
To The Maker Of The World, as he strides out with a dignified command,
Of surveying his families across avery land,
He reaches out his large, strong hand,
To hold my heartbeat of my own internal band,
Of romantic songs to embrace, as I demand,
The certainty of happiness, wealth and health,
Like cards that must be dealt,
The Maker Of The World smiles at me,
Making my selfishness melt,
'My child all you need is to love,
Look how the angels watch over you,
Inside your heartbeat is a sign to step into the day,
Without hate, fear, jealousy and vanity, just give a cheer!
As life trembles like a raindrop on a leaf,
Falling to the warm earth,
Belief in The Maker Of The World,
Will always give you a soft landing,
On ground that rises to the wide expanse of outer space,
Live without wanting,
Live without lies,
The truth is written across the heavens,
As birds fly with the light of serenity,
Across the everchanging skies! '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Gupta 27 February 2014

what a poem, 'THE MAKER OF THE WORLD'. your poetries always inspires me to write better.your every thing in the poetries are right from the selection of words to the feel of poetry..well written and always be writing to inspire the poets like me.

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Dinesan Madathil 22 February 2014

If a poet were there in BC 12,000 and if there were these PH members like all of us, what would be there to thank this maker of the world, I am just wondering. Billions of years of burning and cooling processes and millions of years of fauna and flora emerging and re-emerging after perishing for a long spell were all the phases of this world. The beauty [if at all it exists in any form] in this planet is a poet`s solace and an optimist`s oasis of notions often contradicted. A million years from now this poem will remain as a beautiful piece of a poet`s imaginative flutter and the surviving organisms will not be able to be envious of its writer. Hazel, I am envious of you for reasons unknown and feelings purely enthralling our gregarious platform.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 21 February 2014

This is beautifully written, I like this poem 'The Maker Of The World smiles at me, Making my selfishness melt, '...

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Lyn Paul 18 February 2014

Beautifully written Hazel I always feel your heart in your words. This I love. Thank You

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Rajesh Thankappan 08 February 2014

The truth is written across the heavens, As birds fly with the light of serenity, Across the ever changing skies! Brilliant lines. What God desire of us is honesty. Honesty of thoughts, beliefs and action.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

This poem has been beautifully inscribed and the title has been properly justified. I appreciate it. Thanks for sharing.

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Dimitrios Galanis 14 January 2016

Agreat talent to study carefully its work.[ Oh those wrong ver.code]

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Akhtar Jawad 19 March 2015

'My child all you need is to love, Look how the angels watch over you, Inside your heartbeat is a sign to step into the day, Without hate, fear, jealousy and vanity, just give a cheer! Amazing lines of a wonderful poem that mesmerizes the hearts and souls..................10

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Chuy Amante 28 March 2014

I am rolling of the floor laughing! ! ! I know where you are from. Candy Floss! A wonderful word we learning last Summer! BTW, nice write (you are pretty too!)

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Thomas Carolan 03 March 2014

maker of the world how true a poem your writing comes from the heart live without wanting live without lies

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