The Meadows Of My Mind Poem by Heather Burns

The Meadows Of My Mind

Rating: 5.0


As you wander in the meadows
sometimes I see you there

Strolling up a shady lane
gentle breezes in your hair

Then sometimes in the meadows
running to and fro

gathering beautiful flowers
laughing as you go

I asked you in the meadows
stay and we will find

Roses in the meadows
in the meadows of my mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Zion 27 August 2013

So sweet. I wish I knew who you were calling to the meadows.

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Dee Corpolongo 27 August 2013

This is such an amazing poem, so beautiful is the picture you paint with words. I truly love the feeling so serene, so beautiful left in my mind! Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 August 2013

so beautiful- gentle breezes in your hair - I like it so much and give you 10/10

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 27 August 2013

S o simple and sweet, meanigful that urges to be with nature. I give 10/10

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David Wood 27 August 2013

A lovely poem Heather, wandering through meadows with your loved one.

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Joseph Anderson 30 August 2013

Meadows of my mind-a serenly beautiful metaphor for the mind.I still wish to know your tutor. A delight to ponder

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Queeny Gona 28 August 2013

Lovely write with beautiful imagery! Roses in the meadows In the meadows if my mind.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Wow...Wonderful poem..Beautiful picture very well captured...loved it.

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Marcus Mckinley 27 August 2013

a beautiful reminiscing thought of someone dearly loved. nicely done

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Dave Walker 27 August 2013

A very beautiful poem, flows wonderfully.

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