The Melding Of Two Comments
And so we talk of where
we may be going, ,
what purpose there is
to our being together
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The smiling is like the sunflower at sun-rising womb the lips and teeth fetch the distant heart too near more than any feelings of mystic the cheek gracefully invites like solid cotton punch of luscious lips let the hug come like the warm cloth of snowy winter let the pigeon of minds fly in the bath on moonlit night let the world know that nothing is big than this love
You cannot build a Solid foundation on Mystery ~~~~ Let each other Know ~~~ or let each other go ~~~~ this is truly romantic poem and so passionate by heart; there are melding the two hearts so eroticly; no one can dismiss their parallel emotions and feelings; congrats for being selected again as POD
'The dreams we have, , each Mirror the other' - an ideal condition for a lasting love story! A nice poem, with an equally nice caption and graphic. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!
And so we talk of where we may be going, , what purpose there is to our being together very good poem. tony
I love the line: Let each other know or let each other go. Congrats on poem of the day!
Many a congratulation dear poet for being featured in the POD this beautiful love poem...10
Cool poem cool message. True you have to open up to each other otherwise bad foundation.
Beautiful! Love this poem about love in an unique poetic form! Congratulations on your poem being chosen!
Thank you Banamala (another Beautiful Name, some have names that are Poetry) The Song, at the time this relates to in my life, Our Hearts could love deeply, but cautiously, She took the first step in revealing (Her desire over rode our fear to be open with each other) I didn't possess the maturity of Heart to brave that with anyone before.I owe so much to her for all she gave in full willfulness.
Wow! Such a beautiful real love-story! Such a beautiful song celebrating love and revealing heart to each other! BTW, I like the compliment about my name! Thank you, Dear Poet!
You cannot build a Solid foundation on Mystery ~~~~ Let each other Know ~~~ or let each other go ~~~~ How true! Enjoyed the beautiful love-poem! And the poetic form you have chosen! Congratulations on your poem being selected as POD!
Thank you Malabika (Beautiful Name) There's a back story to this Song, a conversation that opened my eyes, She related how uncomfortable it made her, to not know exactly how I felt about our relationship, she would attempt to talk with me about it several times, One day we sat down, and for once I listened with intent, for she was about to walk away. She opened up, and I learned from her, She Gave me all the insights presented in this Song, and it is dedicated to her.
Thanks, Roger, for your reply. Just to let you know, I have a poem called, " A Hundred Words" (one of my early poems) which contains similar sentiments! Delighted to get in touch with you!
Thank you, each of you, your comments created those Wings kissed gently by the Breeze, for me this Morning, I'm blown away. Floating actually. thank you. Rog'
Many congratulations for this wonderful romantic poem being chosen as Poem of the Day!
Being together! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
" So let aside the hiding game and let go, let it be known" A marvelous life song deserving selection as poem of the Day. Heartiest congratulations.
we meld into and of each other forever, The purpose of love. Nicely written. Congrats being POD
Turning our Chins out over the Sea watching Birds flying free we feel taken above floating on Wings kissed gently by the Breeze....... beautiful.. very fine.. tony congrats for becoming POD
Roger, nice poem! ! But, for most, " Wishful Thinking" . I rate a " 10"
An amazing poem. It is plain to see why it was recommended or chosen as Poem of the Day.
A wonderful poem of the day. Congrats, sir Roger on your featured piece..10+++
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2/26/2026 3:49:51 PM # 1.0.0
Yes knowing each other concretely gives way to love and friendship......uniquely composed 10++