The Perfect Love Poem by Palitha Ranatunge
The Perfect Love
I was at the window during the long nights
Watching you growing and fading
One day I was happy to look at your
full moon face, the other days
You were fading into pitch darkness,
Leaving me all alone, in the darkness
Of the mighty universe, having
No one to share the life
In all tomorrows of the past,
I admired your unique beauty
And felt your kindness
In every palpitation of my heart
But I felt all at once the reality
of your non-existence,
I dreamt in the night, embracing
yout heart, crying indeed for nothing
could be the fragrance of your soul
pierced in to my bones
Like the freezing wind blown at
snow capped mountains
like those picturing in a movie,
My love was with the perfection
of womanhood, that was nothing but
a creation of mine, in my day dreams
ar from the realities of life
Hence I am at the window, like a shadow
gazing at the darkest night
painting symbols of perfect love
that could never have been existed.
Beautiful and so sweet, it makes one sigh reading this remarkable piece of poetry 10+ rate
Leaving me all alone, in the darkness Of the mighty universe, having No one to share the life In all tomorrows of the past, That's how life sums up, cold, quite and lonely with only the moon accompanying in the darkest of dark nights.
You have used your narrative technique too good with an open ending. Keep up
My dear poet, your poe is so unique, so beautiful. Thanks for sharing. 10++++
Beautiful rendition of words. An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction.
Expressed beautifully... written drenched in love and longing. Only a true poet can do this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/14/2024 10:44:29 AM # 1.0.0
I dreamt in the night, embracing yout heart, crying indeed for nothing could be the fragrance of your soul pierced in to my bones Like the freezing wind blown at snow capped mountains like those picturing in a movie, liked this stanza very much. very poetic and full of desire and passion and a great imagination. day dream as you say. thank you. tony