The Poet 4 Poem by lady grace

The Poet 4

Rating: 4.8


how to measure the value of life
is it the wealth or dignity?
who will judge and balance
is it the past or the future?

is there any reward awaits
to every work unfinished
if we want to see a good future
we now start to build a profitable insight..

heart beats... can’t feel it all the time
body and soul will fade
clinch to the grave
but the fruit of our sincerity
remain a living legacy..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julius Luke Victorio 30 July 2009

A truly emotional poem... deserves my 20 +

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Ying Escalona 30 July 2009

please write more....about who..will judge.

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Joseph Poewhit 29 July 2009

The last verses are very insightful.

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Ency Bearis 29 July 2009

a wonderful insight... and your are right... the wisdom is a great legacy... inspirational poem...well written....10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 July 2009

Sincereity always pays rich dividend, but one has to wait for it. For any success, three things are required. Sincere efforts, Time, and Divine Grace. Step (1) One has to till the soil deep, sow the seed, water it and watch it Step (2) Then its own time it takes for growing as a tree. Step (3) With God's grace the tree grows well and gives its fruits. This can be applied to any work we take for achieving success at the end.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2009

heart beats... can’t feel it all the time body and soul will fade clinch to the grave but the fruit of our sincerity remain a living legacy.. that will emerge in cuckoos voice and its fragrence will remain for ever reminding the great creation made by the poet and that is all we are striving for.....namae may not remain, foot prints may vanish but not the poems....well dome poet.....10

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Eyan Desir 04 August 2009

Very nice poet well done....little woman with a beautiful heart

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Aziz Alkaabi 01 August 2009

A very interesting thyme and inquisitive thoughts weaved with some delicate language. Good work.

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rago rago 31 July 2009

a nice poem and giving the truth of life....... the demarcating line and life.......

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Alf Hutchison 31 July 2009

Everyone will leave a legacy of some sort... we should work out now what one we will leave Regards Alf

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