I reverse the curse of danger
Somewherein between needled vine and array of leaves
For I place my soul to lay, to bloom, to soften the eyes
There is the rebirth of pink roses, told by the wind
If I destined to be a pink rose
I chose to reverse the curse of danger
Somewhere surrounded by thorny guardians
Losing attention by the red beauty wont make me loose
Because if i destined to be a rose,
My power is fragrance, i choose
Tell all to find our souls;
When eyes closed and when breathe stopped
For you know they cant see when eyes close (beauty disappear)
For you know they cant stop breathing to live
Then as long as you still breathing
My scent will lingers
to remind you
to remind you
And today wind blows again
To remind you
The pink rose rebirth
In the past i rose, i rose and disappear
Now i reborn and i rise and rise...again
You know, i've reverse the curse
My scent will lingers to remind you to remind you...................to remind my intentions to attract you towards beauty that leads to love.
stanza 3, line 2: i don't know if you 'want' " breathe" or " breath" . they ARE two different words. i used to mix them up. You were/are lucky to have a friend whom you apparently like/liked a lot. May the odor of 'pink roses' always be at hand aka available to you when you want/need it. bri :)
Very pleasant and fragrant, poem and thoughts. May the rose and rise be always blossom. Amen
Yes this poem was using pink roses as the paper hahaha joking! Thanks and Amen
Happy belated birthday.. I love the amazing meaning in your words and how the sweetest, simplest thing gives you pleasure. Thank you
Thank you Lyn.... You always sweet and kind to me, sorry for late reply..I think birthday is about thankful and grateful for what we have....and i grateful for having great friends and people like u..and all cool people that always kind to me..thanks Lyn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a great birthday wish! Rabbie Burns, I am certain, would find joy in this verse!