The Rebirth Of Pink Roses Poem by Unwritten Soul

The Rebirth Of Pink Roses

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I reverse the curse of danger
Somewherein between needled vine and array of leaves
For I place my soul to lay, to bloom, to soften the eyes
There is the rebirth of pink roses, told by the wind

If I destined to be a pink rose
I chose to reverse the curse of danger
Somewhere surrounded by thorny guardians
Losing attention by the red beauty wont make me loose
Because if i destined to be a rose,
My power is fragrance, i choose

Tell all to find our souls;
When eyes closed and when breathe stopped
For you know they cant see when eyes close (beauty disappear)
For you know they cant stop breathing to live
Then as long as you still breathing
My scent will lingers
to remind you
to remind you

And today wind blows again
To remind you
The pink rose rebirth
In the past i rose, i rose and disappear
Now i reborn and i rise and rise...again
You know, i've reverse the curse

Saturday, July 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,self
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today i decided to write about pink roses, or famously known as Rosa damascus... The pink rose that famous for its fragrance, for rise water n have extensive uses especially mediteranean area. Why pink roses? Bcoz today is also my birthday and pink rose is like my old friend since i was a kid, growing up together...there is something about it that help me feel better when i smell it... I feel better mood n recalm my days... So today, we reborn together... We rose we rose but now i rise...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Such a great birthday wish! Rabbie Burns, I am certain, would find joy in this verse!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2020

My scent will lingers to remind you to remind you...................to remind my intentions to attract you towards beauty that leads to love.

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2019

stanza 3, line 2: i don't know if you 'want' " breathe" or " breath" . they ARE two different words. i used to mix them up. You were/are lucky to have a friend whom you apparently like/liked a lot. May the odor of 'pink roses' always be at hand aka available to you when you want/need it. bri :)

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Muhammad Ali 22 November 2019

Very pleasant and fragrant, poem and thoughts. May the rose and rise be always blossom. Amen

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Unwritten Soul 28 November 2019

Yes this poem was using pink roses as the paper hahaha joking! Thanks and Amen

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Lyn Paul 18 July 2019

Happy belated birthday.. I love the amazing meaning in your words and how the sweetest, simplest thing gives you pleasure. Thank you

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Thank you Lyn.... You always sweet and kind to me, sorry for late reply..I think birthday is about thankful and grateful for what we have....and i grateful for having great friends and people like u..and all cool people that always kind to me..thanks Lyn

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