The Suicide Note Of Romeo And juliette Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

The Suicide Note Of Romeo And juliette

Rating: 5.0


Let's poison us together
And take this dagger to pierce our hearts
As we buried them to the edge of a field
Where them will grow into the death of a romance
Take that demise and bring it to the king
Warning him that the rule has killed
The two star-crossed lovers in their youth
As their crucifixes are pinned to his heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ricky M 26 April 2023

I would suggest them to never give up and fight till the very end......let killer cry on his own misery. Your cryptic note is worth reminder to all lovers.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2023

Shakespeare would be proud! LeeAnn, this is beyond MAGNIFICENT! ! !

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Pallavi Tripathi 25 April 2023

Heartbreaking, just as their deaths

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Jayne Louise Davies 25 April 2023

Wonderful poem LeeAnn! Loved it : ) x

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David Wood 25 April 2023

I've just lated a new carpet, and I've got to lay new patio slabs first, and you've got to walk Cooper. Tomorrow's better, (might change our minds by then as it might be a sunny day) ; -)

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 May 2023

Powerful poem, Lee Ann. you bring in a new imagery there

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 May 2023

Splendid writing, LeeAnn. This is in my favorites.

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Nosheen Irfan 26 April 2023

Tragic love story of Romeo and Juliet is once again brought to life in brilliant verse. Bravo LeeAnn!

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M. Asim Nehal 26 April 2023

Tale of two lovers ending on with a note which is worth reading, you made it very interesting LeeAnn, Liked the way you wrote. *****

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Anjandev Roy 26 April 2023

Such an outstanding work.......thanks for sharing......

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