The Vow Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

The Vow

Rating: 5.0


Again another day will rise
Another night too will light
Another snow fall will come
Also another lay my pen quills
But I fear another one like you

There will be another new year
With many another resolutions
Will come another rainy days
Another spring will follow it
But no another heart to beat in

Another path opens if path ends
Another flower blooms in night
Yet another tear will roll down
Another smile will grace my face
But another song without you I fear

There will be no another first love
Nor another ones that followed it
I have no another love apart from you
Before taking another step with you
I'm singing my past with no another vow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 24 December 2009

Oh, how sacred is the Vow. And it's reassuring to know that there is one who takes it seriously - in sickness and health, through every sacrifice - till death. Yes, there are other days, nights, more snow, and more years to come. But only one love of your life, and only one vow, which is unto her. Indeed, she's a lucky lady. What a beautiful poem. My vote is 10.

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Anju Addanki 24 December 2009

thats was a nice one those vows are are something which need to be fulfilled.Merry chistmas and happy new year

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 December 2009

There is no another word to say on this poem except one word 'Fantastic.'

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Janell Cressman 24 December 2009

wow, i am blown away everytime i read one of your poems and this one was no differnt, keep up the amazing job! ! ! ! ! ! (10)

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Marieta Maglas 28 December 2009

But another song without you I fear Excellent meditative poem belonging to lyrism 10++++++++++

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Louis Rams 25 December 2009

a strong love will always outast what comes its way.

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Eyan Desir 24 December 2009

A very nice poem Well crafted good job and merry christams

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 24 December 2009

ooohhh... very nice... very good mostly when read on Christmas eve. MERRY CHRISTMAS!

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Joseph Poewhit 24 December 2009

Words have a real togetherness - MERRY

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