Kranthi Pothineni


The Vow - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Again another day will rise
Another night too will light
Another snow fall will come
Also another lay my pen quills
But I fear another one like you

There will be another new year
With many another resolutions
Will come another rainy days
Another spring will follow it
But no another heart to beat in

Another path opens if path ends
Another flower blooms in night
Yet another tear will roll down
Another smile will grace my face
But another song without you I fear

There will be no another first love
Nor another ones that followed it
I have no another love apart from you
Before taking another step with you
I'm singing my past with no another vow


Comments about The Vow by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (12/28/2009 12:37:00 PM)


    But another song without you I fear

    Excellent meditative poem belonging to lyrism

    10++++++++++
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  • Louis Rams (12/25/2009 7:44:00 PM)


    a strong love will always outast what comes its way. (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 3:26:00 PM)


    A very nice poem
    Well crafted
    good job
    and merry christams
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/24/2009 11:30:00 AM)


    ooohhh... very nice...


    very good mostly when read on Christmas eve. MERRY CHRISTMAS!
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  • (12/24/2009 10:10:00 AM)


    Words have a real togetherness - MERRY (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 9:21:00 AM)


    wow, i am blown away everytime i read one of your poems and this one was no differnt, keep up the amazing job! ! ! ! ! ! (10) (Report) Reply

  • Rajaram Ramachandran (12/24/2009 9:09:00 AM)


    There is no another word to say on this poem except one word 'Fantastic.' (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 7:00:00 AM)


    thats was a nice one those vows are are something which need to be fulfilled.Merry chistmas and happy new year (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2009 3:27:00 AM)


    Oh, how sacred is the Vow. And it's reassuring to know that there is one who takes it seriously - in sickness and health, through every sacrifice - till death. Yes, there are other days, nights, more snow, and more years to come. But only one love of your life, and only one vow, which is unto her. Indeed, she's a lucky lady. What a beautiful poem. My vote is 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 24, 2009


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