Tiny Bird Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Tiny Bird

Rating: 4.6


Tiny bird, titanic sky, what a gift
to your wings, hard to rest
in absolute contentment! enthusiasm itself,
eyes on freedom rivetted, without feeling

your littleness
so much so you are integral
part of space, pushing into
empty air you flap up

somewhere between the excitement
of hopes and crashing futures,
with nothing beneath, save
MAN and his petty things

throttled by napalm invading
wind.the wonder of you
is on me again as if
your mind and mine work in unison.

Thursday, May 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: blank verse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G. Akanji Olaniyi 17 May 2019

Such as nice composition with an interesting imagery. Thanks for sharing!

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Minds working in unison - so

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 May 2019

A tiny bird with eyes of freedom and little wings to fly freely in titanic sky has been deeply and astutely painted in this poem. So touching really. Marvelous work.

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Luke Hobbs 16 May 2019

You've captured the feelings of freedom and limitlessness, and the contrast to the human realm very well.

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Mj Lemon 15 May 2019

Brilliant poem. " Pushing into empty air" - this sounds like an all too familiar human endeavour. And that first stanza has me thinking about the possibility of icebergs in the skies. This is a terrific verse Yoonoos.

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throttled by napalm invading wind.the wonder of you is on me again as if your mind and mine work in unison. wonderful poem......10

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 28 April 2020

Lovely poem and a way with words on expressing the bird in flight. Really good!

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Kingsley Egbukole 04 March 2020

A beautiful poem. Nicely composed...10

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 04 October 2019

the wonder of you is on me again as if your mind and mine work in unison...thank you for sharing

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Hans Vr 12 September 2019

When we wonder and adore tiny bird, we awaken the true poet inside. I love this one.

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