Hours passed by,
Days quickly ran by,
Weeks waved their goodbyes in a hurry,
Months slowly went by, smilling and fading away.
Years hugged you, gave you your joys and pains.
Tears and laughter ceased,
Your joy is when your eyes are closed
And your mind is at rest.....
When darkness patrols the earth...
I like it very much. Peace comes with sleep. Rest with eternal sleep.
Wow, ! 'tis an amzing write! ! ! I really like this poem! ! you are a good poet! ! ! top marks! ! !
To the memory, time is but an instant... We live forever in the hearts and minds of those we have touched... Our dance is never ending... Great write...
convincing poem for granny.Your joy is when your eyes are closed And your mind is at rest..... well done. Merry Christmas
Another piece of gold shiny here, love the emotion you pour here, make me smile while reading this..NIce Poem really_Unwritten Soul
So sweet. Beautiful write. I called my grandmother Granny too. Wow, how cool is that? She was wonderful, as I am sure your Granny is too. :)
life is just going on, only life has no warranty. the only asset for human beings is the air that we inhaling! this is a thought proviking wonderful poem. When darkness patrols the earth... like this line a lot! ! ! ! !
This is very moving, I live with a granny and we both know her mind will be at rest soon. Joys and Pains she goes through but soon she knows her pain will be no more. Love this poem, thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful movement of hours, days, weeks, month, year and life is pictured here so rhythmically. Nice theme..