To Share... Poem by Muhammad Ali

To Share...

Rating: 4.9


Companion...
I have
a breath,
a dream,
and i keep
a fear...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soulful Heart 06 February 2014

Four words yet summing up the whole saga of relationships...

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Valsa George 29 January 2014

We have dreams and fears as long as we have breath! Brevity is the soul of wit! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 January 2014

call these companions can't be shared..Thank you for sharing..

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Malini Kadir 20 January 2014

brilliant in its brevity, pulls the strings of imaginations too!

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Unwritten Soul 08 September 2017

Keep your fear, its is okay but make it as motivation to go crossing this boundary....Muhammad Ali, one day we will tired of being chasing of this fears, and when the day come we wont run again we will face it...Smile, we are your companions to make you fear nothing but a soil for your dream to grow from its tiny seed form!

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Muhammad Ali 10 September 2017

thanks Soul, for your kind words. mostly we smile, face and walk towards life, sometimes we hide.. I try to do so as you said, to do it from now :)

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Mj Lemon 08 September 2017

Brilliant work, Muhammad! That fear...so insidious. And it is so difficult to come to terms with. perhaps the reason for that may be that fear is often rooted in so many benign things, so many common things....like the belief one will confront loss. Perfect verse!

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Susan Williams 15 February 2017

This is a master poem for teaching how to get the absolute most out of the fewest words. Not only that, it gives the reader something to think about and it is not just given to us on a silver platter- -we're going to have to participate in this poem, muse and contemplate and then contemplate again, Outstanding work. 10 and a place on my Fav List.

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Nosheen Irfan 25 August 2016

Brevity is the soul of wit. A terse piece that says a lot about relationships.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 February 2014

sharp and cute message

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