Ali Adamson

To Share... - Poem by Ali Adamson

I have
a breath,
a dream,
and i keep
a fear...

Comments about To Share... by Ali Adamson

  • Susan Williams (2/15/2017 2:10:00 PM)

    This is a master poem for teaching how to get the absolute most out of the fewest words. Not only that, it gives the reader something to think about and it is not just given to us on a silver platter- -we're going to have to participate in this poem, muse and contemplate and then contemplate again, Outstanding work. 10 and a place on my Fav List. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/25/2016 2:11:00 AM)

    Brevity is the soul of wit. A terse piece that says a lot about relationships. (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/9/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    sharp and cute message (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (2/6/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    Four words yet summing up the whole saga of relationships... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (1/29/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    We have dreams and fears as long as we have breath!

    Brevity is the soul of wit! !
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  • (1/29/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    call these companions can't be shared..Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (1/20/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    brilliant in its brevity, pulls the strings of imaginations too! (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (1/20/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    brilliant in its brevity, pulls the strings of imaginations too! (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/17/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    I keep fear. Hope not. When breath and dream are near, one can also keep fear away. Hope we can do that. Beautiful short poem. Nicely expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (1/16/2014 2:31:00 PM)

    I agree with the comments by Yassin and Pradip... indeed it's a brilliant short poem brother...
    an incredible apostrophe or a dramatic matter, whether the addressee is present or absent from the scene, whether directly addressed or just imagined, but the work is dramatised in brief and intense moments, and intensity is heightened when fear is also added to be...shared! ...a marked write!
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  • Sallam Yassin (1/16/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    this two are real companion
    for life (breath life; dream; and fear)
    short but intense
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  • (1/16/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    the three are inseparable, brilliant brevity! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 16, 2014

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