THOUGHTS
Winged messengers of the brain
Ever in motion, never at rest
The sneaking invaders of the quiet
HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION
An ocean in a drop of water
The Cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being
What a wonderful poem. Thought truly is not at rest. Always oscillating here and there. great write
Very innovative presentation Valsa - love the concept and the depth of thought you express.
Triplets for a couple of thoughts blowing like a breeze...
ur poem made the winged messengers of my brain move doubly.. thx for sharing.
Simply loving these triplets. I am glad to have gone to your poems and find these wonderful reflective poems. Thank you Valsa for these gems of poetry.
depth writings /// thoughts and highest perception motherly womb of expression of human existence///
Both the triplets are thoughtful and philosophic, but THOUGHTS has more poetic beauty.
Wow! This is the 1st in the series that I've read and I'm in total awe! Valsa, I love all of your poetry. And now, you've taken it to an even higher level. Can't wait to read the rest in the series! Bravo! ! !
Wonderfully crafted on thought and perception. Cute imaginary. Perception is an ocean in a drop of water whereas thought is winged messenger of the brain. Nice presentation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thoughts! ! Working with the mind. Nice piece of work.