Vices are not crimes but you think,
Crimes are provoked by vices within,
Vices in unified condition scatter,
Illusion is unshackled and it holds.
Even utterly person can imagine it,
Utopia is perceived well is baseless,
During cyclone, bushes bash and dance,
Ballistic balls fall down in ocean.
Otaku cannot find easily causes within,
Brave man can walk on bamboo in circus,
Banality motivates you for penalty,
Proclaiming this does not solve problem.
Utterance of wisdom ultimately motivates,
Ultralight beam turns into light of peace,
Passion jeweled by wisdom opens the jug,
Shrewdness is gained through self awakening.
Astounding personality can be built in bliss,
Being ambiguous one can attain aim of peace,
Making him free from vices he can gain virtues,
Ultimatum rejects violence accepting peace.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,02 July 2018. All rights reserved.
The poem is superb and I specially love the last line, Kumarmani ji. Ultimatum rejects violence accepting peace This is the path to Ahimsa- the collective virtues of Non-violence. Wonderful concept and message, with which i identify totally. Thank you for such a lovely poem.100+++.
Illusion is unshackled and it holds….Ultimatum rejects violence accepting peace! Many times we are baffled by illusion! Sometimes we do not know what to do because of ignorance! I find a valuable piece of advice! Thanks dear sir for sharing…10
Crimes are provoked by vices within First we think a sin, think it again and again, and ultimately we commit it.
a wonderful wise worded poem aimed to release peace? ...……..well written Kumarmani
An excellent poem that we should know by heart. The final stanza says it all. Enjoyed reading it.10 +++++
The title of this poem drew me to read this wonderful write. A title that gives a big impact on the reader. The rest of the work has powerful lines that we can draw words of wisdom and philosophy of life.
We are all filled with both virtues and vices, it is our choices that make us who we want to be. Choosing not to commit a crime or do something akin to it is the key perhaps. A very well written poem Mr Mahakul. Thanks for sharing.
Astounding personality can be built in bliss, Being ambiguous one can attain aim of peace, - Learned a lot and the philosophy of life. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Highly motivational piece of poetry artfully immersed in the nectar of philosophy. This is simply awesome to read and to ponder over. Thanks, Dear Kumarmani ji.