Un Castillo En El Cielo Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Please forgive me I do not know the language........ Yet I understand these pertains to something related to mosquito from the comments. Kindly translate it to English so that I can share you the moments of happiness.

Ahmad, it's impressive that you're multilingual, but do you realize that many of us are not?

sorry I dont know spanish you should put the poem in english also thanks

Briefly and concisely writing - you wrote the cool poem. I like it. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

Sorry Ahmad...I do not know Spanish either...as Eyan says an English version would be helpful

Well it is so different as we used to write in Spanish but it is good. Keep writing.... :)

Una estructura tipo haiku múltiple en Español. Interesante planteamiento. Sigue trabajando! Saludos, Dragon Wizard

buen poema amigo poeta, me gustó mucho las imagenes que proyecta el poema keep at the good work

nice simple but with a lot of feeling :)

The Castle in the Sky...Un tragico castillo en el cielo, un lugar donde no quisiera encontrarme. El poema parece enmascarar la triste realida de la vida. El espejo refleja lo que quieres ver- en el trasfondo; quebrantado! An interesting write.