Unfading Scars Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Unfading Scars

Rating: 4.9


shame I can not hide
ugliness clearly displayed
shattered life never mended
brokenness written upon flesh
ashamed of unfading scars
tormented battle rages in my mind
screaming- just lay down the knife
weakness, failing again
as another scar is traced
bottled up tears releasing
washing over crimson wrists
desperate wishes to end this
a battle painfully lost,
and already started again
as another cut spills more shame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 07 February 2012

a passionate sadness, tormenting, tearing at the soul... may you find peace!

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Dave Walker 07 February 2012

Packed with emotion and pain of fighting a battle against demons that cause the pain. A truly fantastic and honest poem.

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Unwritten Soul 07 February 2012

The unfading scar will remind you each time when you need to do a decision...you will remind to do the best, that was the past time tell..even it look ugly but it save you from more in future_Unwritten Soul

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Dead Leaf 07 April 2012

A GOOD WRITE....NICE ONE..

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Ency Bearis 26 March 2012

A well versed pain and frustration, expressed up to the utmost point when the scars lingers upon you

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Jk M 18 January 2021

Stunning and haunting ❤️

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2016

Shattered life never mended! ! Nice work.

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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

So intense! Yes, that's the word. Please, read some of my words, Silent Scream / A Rose by Anyother Name... ect, there is more, so much more! Great Ink! -Kelly

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Captain Cur 19 May 2012

An ugly topic beautifully written. The conflict in emotions resolved in words, because these words touch us the readers. We all have scars, whether visible or hidden. The wounds heal but the marks remain. Each healed scar must remind us that we have won that particular battle. Now we all must resolve to win the war!

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Joe Black 28 April 2012

Wonderful write. Very vividly written. thank you and continue writing.

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