shame I can not hide
ugliness clearly displayed
shattered life never mended
brokenness written upon flesh
ashamed of unfading scars
tormented battle rages in my mind
screaming- just lay down the knife
weakness, failing again
as another scar is traced
bottled up tears releasing
washing over crimson wrists
desperate wishes to end this
a battle painfully lost,
and already started again
as another cut spills more shame.
Packed with emotion and pain of fighting a battle against demons that cause the pain. A truly fantastic and honest poem.
The unfading scar will remind you each time when you need to do a decision...you will remind to do the best, that was the past time tell..even it look ugly but it save you from more in future_Unwritten Soul
A well versed pain and frustration, expressed up to the utmost point when the scars lingers upon you
So intense! Yes, that's the word. Please, read some of my words, Silent Scream / A Rose by Anyother Name... ect, there is more, so much more! Great Ink! -Kelly
An ugly topic beautifully written. The conflict in emotions resolved in words, because these words touch us the readers. We all have scars, whether visible or hidden. The wounds heal but the marks remain. Each healed scar must remind us that we have won that particular battle. Now we all must resolve to win the war!
Wonderful write. Very vividly written. thank you and continue writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a passionate sadness, tormenting, tearing at the soul... may you find peace!