Wandering Soul Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Wandering Soul

Rating: 5.0


her bleeding feet callused
wandering lost for so long
this vacant soul searching
longing to finally belong.
telling of her broken story
rustling dry and cracked,
crimson stained pages turn.
silently her life is fading
only splintered pieces remain
grasping, longing to hold on
never finding any change
no words left to describe
the empty hollowness inside.
wandering lost and alone
this tired soul searches
faintly hearing whispers,
a beautiful hushed lullaby
haunted calls from the grave
beckoning to the broken
seeking solace unknown.
the whispered melodies
leads this restless soul
to find comfort buried below.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bulletcookie 2017 30 April 2012

Deeply poignant and well delivered! It strikes to very heart of all that seeks solace in this world. Well done SPGrl and welcome back!

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Kevin East 05 May 2012

Beautiful, touching and pain we can feel in your words..brilliant

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Cosmic Dreamer 10 May 2012

Life can sometimes be such a painful journey... It can sometimes seem that we are all blind travellers on an epic journey of nothingness... Yet life's pains are merely lessons that grow the soul... You are an epic poet my friend...

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Hmmm! Finally, I could not stop reading till the last word. This is wonderfully written. You have a way with words. You artfully got my eyes and mind stuck on this one. Thanks

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Sara Fielder 30 April 2012

Ah there's our favorite injured soul laying it down now like no one else can. You still gor it grl. You kill me softly with the pen. Write on!

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

Brilliant! No doubt my dear friend, your talent is superb and it is clearly shown in every single one of your poems! I know the feeling for I wrote a poem with the same title! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC

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Heyyou Boy 21 July 2012

This is a really great write. I can feel her longing.

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Dougie Fresh 10 July 2012

Super cool poem chic! i like it a lot!

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Unwritten Soul 01 July 2012

As always the background was dark with pale write to bold the words and meaning....some red foot print cokor your steps while you wondering in this nice poetry, with a bit spirit to wander..nice job, keep wrting SG! _Unwritten Soul

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Joe Foster 12 May 2012

This is the best one I read today. I can relate too.

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