Wasting Away Poem by Cowboy Ron Williams

Wasting Away

Rating: 5.0


It's fairly easy to lose weight
when you've lost half your teeth.
For every tooth I have on top,
there's nothing underneath!

There are few foods that I can chew;
that's all I have to say,
so due to lack of nourishment,
I simply fade away.

Wasting Away
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That picture is not really me. It's just a picture I found on the internet.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
wes vogler 09 September 2021

well done young man I totally understand

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M Asim Nehal 09 September 2021

I liked the humour part. Well written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 November 2021

A very entertaining write imbued with wit and humor. Cleverly written.

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Smoky Hoss 21 September 2021

Very good; humorous but true! Great picture, I've seen that fella somewhere else.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2021

Beautifully expressed....loved it

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 September 2021

I love this humourous poem Bravo! Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 September 2021

Of course I know the picture is not yours, you are handsome and not that old, but you wrote a humorous poem 5 Stars for you dear Ron!

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 April 2022

Sylvia, my dear, I love you and your positive attitude, but how can you possibly know what I look like? I have never shown my real picture on here!

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