Watching The Bud Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Watching The Bud

Rating: 4.7


Sitting in the balcony
I watch the rose bud
Swaying in the breeze
Waiting to open up
With the first ray of
Sun and attract the bees

I watch the first ray
Of sun appear in the
East and fall on the bud
And its petals open up
Releasing sweet scents
And deep color of blood

I watch it smiling in
The air with bees and
Butterflies flitting around
In the eve when sun
Is down I find it dried
And fallen to the ground

Friday, December 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flower,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 04 December 2020

Minute observation of the life cycle of a rose bud and linking it with nature's law for the living has been nicely conceptualized through a simple yet profound melody. Thanks for sharing.5 stars.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 December 2020

Good one. Its a rose of a poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2020

A beautifully crafted poem with compelling imagery. An astute observation on the interaction between a flower bud and the forces of nature. A great painting of the many wonders of nature! Congratulations for a truly deserved accolade.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2020

The budding of a beautiful rose flower. ? Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2020

A fabulous poem! I am delighted to find this wonderful poem being displayed today on the home page as the poem of the Day! Many congratulations! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 March 2022

Beautiful poem. I want to have some quotes from your pen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2020

Beautiful poem, A smiler, so well written and such great pleasure to read, Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! CONGRATULATIONS dear Poet Tiku Sir.5 Stars Full Vote! In a Wonderous way you watch the rose bud In the eve when sun Is down I find it dried And fallen to the ground. Never in my thoughts that the rose is for One DAY only!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 December 2020

I watch it smiling in The air with bees and Butterflies flitting around In the eve when sun Is down I find it dried And fallen to the ground /// beautifully depicted the smiling bud in the air, sunlight; bud smiles when the butterflies are flying, when the bees are buzzing, when the lovers are coming to smell it; beautiful poem shared; congrats for being selected this poem as POD and from me 5********

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Shaun Cronick 20 December 2020

Tiku, salutations to you good sir and great kudos as well bestowed for your uplifting poem of soothing calm and beauty, deservedly chosen as today's Member Poem of the Day. I wish you well and may God Bless and Keep you and the loved ones around you. Congratulations again and thank you kindly Take care and enjoy life and poetry and all the good they have to offer.

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Hannatu Adamu 20 December 2020

Nice one there, well-done!

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