Wet Evening Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Wet Evening

Rating: 5.0

On the dazzling forehead of sky
no kiss of the clouds

Now it's the pregnancy of rainy season
tears of the black clouds
in the luscious lips of thunder

broken heart is swinging
on the torn net of the stars

no dream of life there is
but love now spreading the odor of the corpse
on the pyre of remembrance

flooded all over
inundated- grave of raining...........

04.08.2020 Chattogram

Saturday, August 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: painful,rain drops
Varsha M 08 August 2020

Beautiful words of rain drops.

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M Asim Nehal 08 August 2020

Excess of rain is equally bad. When clouds are not welcomed, Water is everywhere, rivers are flooded and instead of life giving it becomes life taking. An articulate poem on the subject. Nicely woven with the silken words.10++

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Kostas Lagos 08 August 2020

Wonderful piece of poetry!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 08 August 2020

no dream of life there is but love now spreading the odor of the corpse on the pyre of remembrance.................................... such brilliant the skill of uttering love in favor of life, really excellent. Just run. Thank you very much..... Pranab k c

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Wet evening! ! ! ! Net unable to catch the rain! Let there be life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mac Che 09 February 2022

Wet evening; that's the deep pain of heart; factastically wrote

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Valsa George 11 August 2020

Yes, this is the situation in Kerala too! Rain is pouring down incessantly and the rain water mixes with the tears of the people! Lands are inundated, many have lost their lives in landslide and torrential rain! A timely write, Mahtab!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 August 2020

A deeply poignant write. Sadness and deep pain have been painted wonderfully on the canvas of this marvelous poem.

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me poet yeps poet 10 August 2020

MB of BD You are enjoying pregnancy of rainy season It is child of chills we are seeing Who made pregnant? Enormously done Anorexic thought you brought Now rain drops will make earth pregnant MB of BD made everywhere pregnancy.

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Anjandev Roy 09 August 2020

This is glorious and profound write......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.

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