What Is Love Poem by Tareq Jalabi

What Is Love

Rating: 4.3


Love is an energy
which could not be worn out
but it changes through life
from artist to art
it is the main reason
why a lover has a heart
so loving each other again
we should start
what`s the point of having
wheels without a cart
they might go on
but they will be apart

we have became like
the moon and the sun
when one of us come
the other is gone
i hate my life that
i hope i have a gun
so writing our story
finally will be done

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

what is love? love is like a nightmare, too. hahaha.. yeah, you rocked with this piece, i love it... keep it up! !

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Ershad Mazumder 11 October 2008

If you want to die Fall in love If you want to fall Raise your head And ask the sky To vacate To create a room For a lover

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 06 September 2008

Hello Blue, I am trying again to send you my comment...trying to recall what I said previously. I am pleased that you have the voice and heart of a poet. Happier still that you took pen in hand and not a gun to express yourself. Love really is an adventure, be patient, roses will bloom again. Dorothy I believe in the power of love...I am, of course, no longer '20' Hope this message gets through to you. Here I go again...

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Wahida Wassini 18 July 2008

Wow...i like this poem.. ^^

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Rema Prasanna 11 July 2008

a bit of frustration but you expressed your feelings very well.... wish spring of love bloom in your life... Re, a

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Allie Rodriguez 13 September 2009

Beautiful defenition of love. I really enjoyed reading it! :) Allie♥

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Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2009

'.........................like the moon and the sun when one of us come the other is gone'... i liked the pathetic humor inside these lines...good work...thanks...10

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Delicate Heart 28 April 2009

nice piece, well expressed your own feelings, though some effing us words disgrace her slightly, keep writing pearls of wisdom.......rated ten for the love contained within..............

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

This started out so positive, but it ended so sad. With the title, 'What is Love', how can that be? It seems that your love has become a sadness. I hope that has changed. Your stanzas were quite beautiful. A nice flowing poem to read. GW62

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Little Morning Star 02 January 2009

love is really beautiful for everyone.. this is beautiful work..

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