Love is an energy
which could not be worn out
but it changes through life
from artist to art
it is the main reason
why a lover has a heart
so loving each other again
we should start
what`s the point of having
wheels without a cart
they might go on
but they will be apart
we have became like
the moon and the sun
when one of us come
the other is gone
i hate my life that
i hope i have a gun
so writing our story
finally will be done
If you want to die Fall in love If you want to fall Raise your head And ask the sky To vacate To create a room For a lover
Hello Blue, I am trying again to send you my comment...trying to recall what I said previously. I am pleased that you have the voice and heart of a poet. Happier still that you took pen in hand and not a gun to express yourself. Love really is an adventure, be patient, roses will bloom again. Dorothy I believe in the power of love...I am, of course, no longer '20' Hope this message gets through to you. Here I go again...
a bit of frustration but you expressed your feelings very well.... wish spring of love bloom in your life... Re, a
Beautiful defenition of love. I really enjoyed reading it! :) Allie♥
'.........................like the moon and the sun when one of us come the other is gone'... i liked the pathetic humor inside these lines...good work...thanks...10
nice piece, well expressed your own feelings, though some effing us words disgrace her slightly, keep writing pearls of wisdom.......rated ten for the love contained within..............
This started out so positive, but it ended so sad. With the title, 'What is Love', how can that be? It seems that your love has become a sadness. I hope that has changed. Your stanzas were quite beautiful. A nice flowing poem to read. GW62
love is really beautiful for everyone.. this is beautiful work..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what is love? love is like a nightmare, too. hahaha.. yeah, you rocked with this piece, i love it... keep it up! !