When Grey Days Outnumber The Sunny Poem by Practicing Poetess
When Grey Days Outnumber The Sunny
When darkness is plentiful,
Or pain is abundant,
It seems hope is silent
As you soldier on.
But sunshine's most noticed
After days of storm clouds,
And darkness seems darkest
Right before the dawn.
Your images of darkness, sunshine and the dawn relate so tellingly to the human condition. A poem of ultimate hope.
Thank you so much, Michael! Your sensitivity enables you to zero-in on the meaning behind my poem.
I like this quick poem; well written and smooth. The last two lines drives it home. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Thomas, for reading and commenting! Most of my poems are usually longer. This one showed me how much can be said in few words.
Thank you so much, Becca! Replies to comments messed up again- - I sure hope you get this!
An Ever So Beautiful Woven Poem! ! ! ! ! On Nature, Sunlight, And Hope! ! ! ! ! With Very Heart Warming Feel! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 11:17:34 AM # 1.0.0.1119
An amazing write that gives hope. Beautifully crafted and well executed piece.
Thank you, Rose Marie! This one is 'hot off the press'- - I was sitting here reading and listening to music, and this poem just came to me- - I had to jot it down quickly, before I lost it!