poet Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

When You'Ll Be Away I'Ll Remember This

I love you need you and want you so much
Give me baby give me please one more touch
Baby let's dance cheek to cheek one more time
Remember me like your favorite rhyme
Give me baby give me please one more kiss
When you'll be away I'll remember this
Give me baby give me please one big hug
My romantic mood is on don't unplug
Rock me baby rock me please like earthquake
Eat me baby eat me please like hotcake

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 4, 2012
Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 4, 2012

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  • Owain Glyn (12/5/2012 6:18:00 AM)

    You are a firm romantic!

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  • Matthew Peel (12/5/2012 4:03:00 AM)

    Very well written.... Can really feel the passion, keep up the great work.

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  • Jan Oskar HansenJan Oskar Hansen (12/4/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    very feeling poem written with love in heart full of love

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (12/4/2012 11:23:00 AM)

    Great passion, this poem would make a beautiful love song and it would be a number one hit! Wonderful rhythm and flow, love it!

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  • Stewart Gideon (12/4/2012 9:32:00 AM)

    now that is a really romantic piece...good work

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (12/4/2012 7:19:00 AM)

    You always meant to be a romantic poet, because the lines will always speak in the best when you make it...you are a great writer my friend Asif_Soul

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  • Riffat SamadRiffat Samad (12/4/2012 7:01:00 AM)

    From the title to the last line it is a wonderful love poem.

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  • Murasaki KitsuneMurasaki Kitsune (12/4/2012 6:49:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, short sweet and to the point I like it.

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  • Scarlett OutlawScarlett Outlaw (12/4/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Romantic and funny - the last line Eat me baby eat me please like hotcake It's good though!

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  • Emmanuel Odei OduroEmmanuel Odei Oduro (12/4/2012 5:11:00 AM)

    Simple but romantic.

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (12/4/2012 4:28:00 AM)

    Hope your love likes this romantic beauteous write with rhyme and rhythm.

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  • Joseph NdawulaJoseph Ndawula (12/4/2012 4:17:00 AM)

    Perfectly suiting the last moment you share when she is going away for a while

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  • Utsav PatelUtsav Patel (12/4/2012 3:14:00 AM)

    Wow.. Its very beautiful... I wish to be the major of your poem...

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  • Vishal SharmaVishal Sharma (12/4/2012 2:48:00 AM)

    oh my god..what a poem..outstanding..mind boggling rhyme..
    i am going to gift it to my girlfriend..

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  • Payal Parande (12/4/2012 2:23:00 AM)

    very romantic and gentle...........love it

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