When You'Ll Be Away I'Ll Remember This Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

When You'Ll Be Away I'Ll Remember This



I love you need you and want you so much
Give me baby give me please one more touch
Baby let's dance cheek to cheek one more time
Remember me like your favorite rhyme
Give me baby give me please one more kiss
When you'll be away I'll remember this
Give me baby give me please one big hug
My romantic mood is on don't unplug
Rock me baby rock me please like earthquake
Eat me baby eat me please like hotcake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 04 December 2012

You always meant to be a romantic poet, because the lines will always speak in the best when you make it...you are a great writer my friend Asif_Soul

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Riffat Samad 04 December 2012

From the title to the last line it is a wonderful love poem.

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Murasaki Kitsune 04 December 2012

Beautiful poem, short sweet and to the point I like it.

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Scarlett Outlaw 04 December 2012

Romantic and funny - the last line Eat me baby eat me please like hotcake It's good though!

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Emmanuel Odei Oduro 04 December 2012

Simple but romantic.

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Owain Glyn 05 December 2012

You are a firm romantic!

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Matthew Peel 05 December 2012

Very well written.... Can really feel the passion, keep up the great work.

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Jan Oskar Hansen 04 December 2012

very feeling poem written with love in heart full of love

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Hazel Durham 04 December 2012

Great passion, this poem would make a beautiful love song and it would be a number one hit! Wonderful rhythm and flow, love it!

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Stewart Gideon 04 December 2012

now that is a really romantic piece...good work

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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