Where Do I Live? Poem by Dee Daffodil

Where Do I Live?

Rating: 5.0


Where do I live, you ask me?
I live by the sea
On a mountain
In the trees...
In my house, in a home
wherever, I choose to roam
I live free, yet confined
By the corners of my mind
My body stay in one place
While my mind is in another
Yet my spirit goes
Wherever it damn well chooses
But my soul...
That I take with me
Wherever I go
And that's where I live
And can be found...
Find my soul...
And you've found me

Dee Daffodil (HW) 31 January,2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cecil (cj) Krieger 07 February 2007

I don’t know about your soul, but I most certainly have found your beautiful poem.

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Danny Reynolds 06 February 2007

I live in a septic tank, floating in the middle of a minestrone lake. But I get every other Sunday off. (We have no limits, eh Dee?) Danny

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David Taylor 05 February 2007

Dear Dee, I know what you mean, and a lovely way of saying it, thank you. Love David.

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Not a member No 4 01 February 2007

Sounds like a sensible place to be - floating free but secure. Clever words. jim

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Ivan Donn Carswell 31 January 2007

Yep, found your soul so you must be here - poem #79! Nice place to hide it Dee! Rgds, Ivan

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David Threadgold 17 September 2008

Hi Dee. I agree everyone should go where they please even if only in their dreams. Great poem thanks **10** Regards Dave T

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Francesca Johnson 28 April 2007

A poem we can all relate to, I'm sure. You've worded this well, Dee. The imagination can run off to anywhere it wants to. Get the kettle on, I'm coming over for an imaginary chat! Love, Frannie xxx

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Diane Violet 09 April 2007

A wonderful poem Dee, I have to agree..................All the best, Diane

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Stug Jordan 05 April 2007

A struggle between out-of-body and in-body? Which is preferable, and which is more accesible to others? For a short poem, this skillfully raises more than one issue, and deals with them cleanly with all the words. Though, for you, it's a subject that'll never be QUITE resolved... S x

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fanniesson - 07 February 2007

great flow great poem

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