Why Have You Left Me? Poem by Valsa George

Why Have You Left Me?

Rating: 5.0


Once there was spring all around
With plants and blooms in shade and scent abound
Butterflies from here and there and places unseen
Flitted back and forth in colorful sheen

Birds sang tuneful songs of contentment
Squirrels and bunnies hopped in spirits buoyant
But all along now I see trees, leafless and bare
Nakedly shivering in winter’s chilly air

Even when the Earth adorns in full glory
Here I bide alone, so dull and dreary
Oh! Dear! Why have you hurriedly left me?
Was it to make me drift aimless in this turbulent sea?

We were once a happy pair of doves
Seeking warmth under each other’s wings
By sundown, we flew to our evening nest
Under temple spires, we sought easeful rest

We walked the meadows, gathering spring flowers
We roamed aimless through ocean strands
We watched life’s ceaseless ebb and flow
We waited eager to grab life’s evanescent glow

We knew sorrow’s depth and worth
Each morn, for us, was love’s rebirth
We walked close to paths supernal
And lived ever in love eternal

Now I have lost the rhyme n’ rhythm of life
I see the world around with sorrows rife
I am a broken reed far beyond repair
With no songs to be played now or ever

Once we danced to the rising and lilting measure
Each synchronized step, we took with such pleasure
Oh! I hear from far, your anklets rhyme and chime
They ring in my ears through the time

Each wayside flower to me recalls your lovelorn face
The wind swayed lilacs reflect your grace
Deep in silent night the odor of your flowing hair
Comes wafting, and for a while, I feel you near

A boundless emptiness often fills my space
The question –‘What next’ stares at my face
Yet never shall I yield, but shall bravely sail
Hoping, we together shall meet at the Golden Dale

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fanciful and fictitious!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 18 April 2013

So this piece is to be enjoyed for its beauty and poetry, there's no need to contextualize from the angle of a poetess, and of course there's nothing like the jilted love...Beautiful lines are many, like: Once there was spring all around Now I have lost the rhyme n’ rhythm of life

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 April 2013

Oh so dis isnt persönal eh. How u likened d jilted love feel to d dry wry bare winter has churned out a fabulous epic poem i enjoyd each line. Kudos.

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M Asim Nehal 12 July 2016

This is a great imagination by the poetess on loneliness and longing to meet again. Nicely written,10+++

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Wonderfully worded.my friend!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2014

What else a man can do? If someone very dear and necessary for our life is no more, we can only expect to meet him on the Golden Gate.

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Jayne Davies 07 February 2022

A wonderful poem! x

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Kolette Montague 07 February 2022

Fictitious it may be, but still very powerful. It grabbed me from the start and would not let me go. Wonderful work.

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Bri Edwards 07 February 2022

: ) bri xxxxxx

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 May 2019

A boundless emptiness often fills my space The question –‘What next’ stares at my face Yet never shall I yield, but shall bravely sail Hoping, we together shall meet at the Golden Dale....touching expression with a bright hope. Beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for shaing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2016

In this turbulent sea! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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