Unwritten Soul


Wing Our Loves Over Their Hearts (Ft Ellias) - Poem by Unwritten Soul

'No love in stranger hearts'

Tired to hear those words
Repeating sound played in our ears
For us at first dont know each others
Forbidden us to smile even to a simple Hi
Living in the cage, they set our boundaries
Opposite sights, thought we born to continue their fights
Ignorance, the dead light blind our sight

Blinking eyes we only stare between this rule
Our hand like strong bird wings, but tied cant fly
Just stay inside we wait and cry
Maybe we just unimportant actors
Follow politic direct, caged in drama
Scripted by lust, Illusion by reigning power,
Acting in this anyway, really hurt, will it be over?

Maybe someday...one day..we shall waiting that day
The day we will fly together, touch the sky full of stars
We bound to their unfair rule, where hates not peace us
And our hands cant hold on, hates discriminate loves
Cant forever to see each other blood, will we move to safe side?
As grudge change red rose with the red blood
In this unending war, end of lovely earth,
Hatred of two sides, and we sacrificed in between
Maybe someday...one day..or dreaming in a day
Will be just a day, we only sleep on dead bed, end of our day
They kill those children smile, help them erase older people smile
Why someone has to be killed for cruel vision
As we know, life has given as everyone mission
But we all now in two cages, separated in jar of hatred

Tired of those words
The voices only echoes us more fears
We need to learn from old men but we lost them
We used to hear children laugh but cry they think as lullaby
We miss when the rain painting seven colors over the window
Never, never this raining blood, create the same magical rainbow

In this shadowed place, Living in different invisible cages
I stare and ponder, wonder if someday we can fly together

'Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life'

That's what i longing to hear
Oh God if there still an open sky
Or if only just to have one big cage
It just enough for us to build a palace
Let it be our place, living as one with peace and grace
For our hands hold theirs, cheering days, counting stars
Oh God if there's something like my dreaming sky
Will mend our broken smiles, for our life revived
For all hands hold loves to make world survives

Till the world end, only loves survive our life


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is a poem that i wrote with my contributor and friend, Ellias..I was honored when he said he had a vision about humankind, he sent me a poem, talking about war and the poem stressing about suffering of people with the boldness of children life and future issues. So we finally decided to hold our idea be one to voice, never supporting war and bless for every child, they were born for better life not to adapt in hating atmosphere. It took me a week to read and ate all the original poem, and digested before i released all in a new shape, my interpretation of the original poem (posted in his page 'Friends over the world') even though the stricture got a big reconstruction the idea was from Ellias, and some still in same shape...i just making it in my own idea while embracing his own, because i support peace not war as for children to live better...The title originally in Persian language (Simorgh parandeye solh- freedom, bird) but as much i can also intrigued by the fully Persian words, i decide to rename it so everyone can understand, a mirror to the poem...Thanks Ellias for believing me to deliver your idea, i have this chance to voice my support! ...Never love war but people and children all over the world_Unwritten Soul

Comments about Wing Our Loves Over Their Hearts (Ft Ellias) by Unwritten Soul

  • (7/8/2017 3:09:00 PM)


    Another outstanding collaboration, Soul.
    Yes, only love survives; hang on to it!
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  • Aranthabailu Ummar (11/16/2012 12:25:00 AM)


    no you are not in cages, you are in a plain ground
    there you can extend your love
    see the air blowing it will carry your wishes
    where you want when you want and to whom you want

    but when you going to make this with political face
    this face have many colours. politics starts from politicians and policies
    the heart of politicians are imbibed with many things
    and eventhou they have the love and peace mind to be recognized in this earth
    they playing many games there they are going to forget their originity
    so their policies and political decisions make them to over come human values
    and they are stick to some thing to destroy the human feelings and rights
    hence they ignored the importance of the child child birth and male and female comparision
    when they are sick to some ideas or opinions most of them will not think about the bad out comings
    so peace will always there as the word as we express it. because all the creature in this earth looking for it
    because no body really do not have it
    so peace be the word from the merciful lord as quran express it
    ok i read some the lines from your poem because i have a lack of time to go thru all the lines because it is
    too big
    so next i will look for the time and will go thru it
    any have thanks for good work and a day you will be recognized by the world people for the humble work
    whenver where ever you go high i will be there to prayer with allah to grow you more

    have a nice day
    yours onle
    au
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  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (10/15/2012 2:06:00 PM)


    Every word is true, but on the other side we can see that everybody has to learn a lesson and some people can learn only through tragedy, like I did. I am happy I went through starvation, wars, dead bodies, because this way I can appreciate the good life better. Every second of my life is a thanksgiving to God that He gave me those terrible things and I could come out better from them. Some people have good life and still they are full with fear, worry, blame, and judgement, never have enough and so on. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (9/30/2012 12:58:00 AM)


    marvellous is only world fr yr poem! (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (9/28/2012 8:18:00 AM)


    I highly appreciate your concern. We all hate war and love peace but still war ravages civilization. Lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2012 4:55:00 PM)


    This is one of those poems one can call perfect. This is beautiful, touching with a powerful message behind. Lovely :) (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2012 4:22:00 AM)


    intelligent writing skill! Multi dimensional views. very inspirational too. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (9/16/2012 12:59:00 AM)


    I can relate to the feelin of being in 'a one big cage', . Admired yor brill musin epic! (Report) Reply

  • (9/15/2012 10:41:00 AM)


    The beauty of life is in the waiting. Hope surviving amidst the wasteland of hate and selfish politics is definitely a humanistic endeavour. Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Hamid Negah (9/13/2012 3:33:00 PM)


    You worked so well with Elias...Your poetry have good rhyme and also very meaningful...well done soul. (Report) Reply

  • (9/13/2012 1:37:00 PM)


    This poetic discourse of beautiful, compassionate and inspirational thoughts on the future of our world heightens the awareness of the reader and all who are concerned. Our hearts are for a positive outcome concerning such touching matters. Beautifully done. Thank you Soul. (Report) Reply

  • (9/12/2012 1:22:00 AM)


    Soul has made an introspection of Love here and decorated it with lovely ornaments(his thoughts) and made it visible for all of us, the true essence of love and life.Great work. I really love the philosophy behind it :) (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (9/11/2012 3:41:00 AM)


    Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life' I agree with you. there are some person in PH family whom i can never forget. you r one of them. u r my unwritten friend. xlent write. (Report) Reply

  • (9/10/2012 6:33:00 AM)


    'Existence of love is nothing but to embrace life'...............................


    magical write.......amazing idea
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  • Elena Sandu (9/9/2012 12:40:00 AM)


    How beautifully said! If only I could hold my hand with you to wait for love and smiles to be spread. Meanwhile I write the same with you trying to wake myself, to be aware to learn of ways peace could be brought.. (Report) Reply

  • Abdallah Gamal (9/8/2012 1:16:00 AM)


    My great friend, my dear brother, I've never read such an amazing write, or seen sech a beautiful picture, you know that you're the best poet here to me, and you prove that to me day after day. May Allah bless you my brother :) (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (9/7/2012 12:31:00 PM)


    My Dear Soul, even though you and young Ellias are trying to put me out of the pirate business with this fine write, there is alway the poetry business. Is there much gold in poetry? All kidding aside love this write between two fine minds. Beautiful message expressed here. (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (9/7/2012 11:58:00 AM)


    dear poet(_soul)
    I think this is just a misapprehension.

    I know you care, Ellias cares too, so do i.
    I meant the politicians, the gun makers do not give a damn care.Maybe if we were in their position, we would do the same.

    I really love your philosophy behind the Yan-yin(the other form of the YING-YANG) .
    YING-YENG-YANG.so innovative pal.
    but my philosophy behind the yan-yin is:
    you see where the black is going to be increased the white is goin to be decreased.what i meant is:
    during the ceturies there been poeple like Napoleon, Adolf Hitler who looked for the power and killed so many poeple during the centuries.so you see there are always poeple like them.so we can not separate white from the black.

    Yes all we can do is just try.
    thank you and sorry for the misapprehension.
    cheers
    Nader
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  • (9/7/2012 6:18:00 AM)


    Who cares? If you even need to ask that question, then you know something is wrong. Just when we think life is to bleak to bare, my dear Soul brings back light and hope to my soul. Putting light back into the shadows. More people thinking the way of our dear Soul would be a beautiful world to share. In my humble opinion. (Report) Reply

  • Gordon Tseng (9/7/2012 4:39:00 AM)


    Yes.
    Wing our loves over their hearts!
    Wing our pen to free the minds with scars!
    Good work!
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 29, 2012


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