Years to live
but there will be one day
and if...
One day,
If i am invisible to your eyes
If my voice is hiding behind your ears
Perhaps i am just a shadow of past
wandering but just forgotten memory dust
I wont recall colour of past for me to be remembered
I wont ask to be in your absent mind, nor i will whisper
Perhaps time just direct our stories for a while
Fill the gaps of our minutes and now we're done
Perhaps thats is the weakness of human hearts
One day,
If i cant own my breath
If i found my next journey, my eternal chapter
I'll hope i am not be forgotten by One and only
The One that never stop caring me
because if He forgets me
I lost it all
Perhaps, now
I've seconds or years to live
but one day
I'll live eternally
Hopefully with His bless and peace
Soul, these are such great words of and for hope. There's something about the first few stanzas that really addresses the idea of loss or death in a sense in which the body may exist, the person may go about a routine, but there is no connection to those around. There is a profound, sublime, and amazing tone to this work, Soul.
You always, always kind to me and put lot encouragement, merci dear! life is temporary and too short to give up for eternal death and eternal life should be peaceful if not it permanent pain i just feel people may forget because everyone has life to live but the One and only always free to hold hands :) As much life is living on, hope is alive too..im sure about it :) much sunlight wishes to you dear
Superb write, as usual......thank u, dear poet.....anjandev roy.
Such an inspiring spiritually uplifting poem. Yes dear it's great that remembers us always. If is unhappy with us then we lost it all true as u said. Thumbs up for this great writing. Take care.
I read this with tears in my eyes. So absolutely beautifully penned, so spiritual and so timeless. A resounding 10 and straight to my favorites.
Thanks dear, it was come to me when i feel down and feel like i have to hold back my root and my root is strengthen by Him, thanks so much Simone for sharing same emotional moment through out this poetry.
This is a beautiful poem on life and death having spiritual touch for next birth. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Soul. Live eternal... in peace and calmness. to live so, it is much blessing than die eternal. Yes, Soul, you are right.. He cares that He keeps you safe from that worst eternal life.
Hi Muhammad Ali, Live eternal once our life here done but to have peaceful then....you know we just only need His Merfcy May He keeps us better and save us in His guidance and blessing If you feel worry now, at least we are not alone :) Hope is there Take care my dear friend