Winter's Mystic Journey Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Winter's Mystic Journey

Rating: 5.0


Walking beside such railway lines,
We can see far mountains and forest,
Green scene is covered by mist of winter,
A hut inside forest is found near trees.

Journey of winter has brought up dream,
For us this is a nice experience to feel,
Mystic appearance of sunlight falls on,
Railway tracks pierce through mountains.

We are walking but waiting for the train,
This rare train will arrive and go away,
Foggy weather identifies journey of winter,
This mountain is crown of victory of scene.

We are fortunate to observe mystical winter,
This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day,
To travel in eternal path of love and peace,
This season takes us frequently into trance.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 January 2018. All rights reserved.

Winter's Mystic Journey
Wednesday, January 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,perception,season,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,19 December 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 19 January 2018

How nice! Isn't it great that we still have trains? I would always prefer them to a car or airplane as it gives me more time to connect with eternal path of love and peace. Loved the sending to nature's beauty blessings, thank you for share.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 January 2018

Mystic journey on a misty morning is delightful indeed with figures fading in the distance.

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Bharati Nayak 17 January 2018

We are fortunate to observe mystical winter, This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day, To travel in eternal path of love and peace, This season takes us frequently into trance.- - - - -Beautiful depiction of winter season as well as life's journey to the ultimate goal.

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Jeanette Telusma 16 January 2018

Winter is very well depicted in each line. So marvelously written. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.

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Seema Chowdhury 16 January 2018

Well expressed and nicely composed. Thank you for sharing.

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Savita Tyagi 05 December 2018

Winter is here with all its grandure!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2018

A beautiful prose poem that captures a fascinating train journey. A travel that allows you to see the beauty of nature brings happiness in our hearts. This is what is depicted in this wonderful piece of work. Very well presented and beautifully crafted.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 February 2018

Such railway lines! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 20 January 2018

a wonderful poem of the magic that surrounds us all of the time? .............well written Kumarmani

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Loke Kok Yee 20 January 2018

A journey of love and peace seen through the beauty of winter. the message is pleasantly imparted to the readers. Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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