Walking beside such railway lines,
We can see far mountains and forest,
Green scene is covered by mist of winter,
A hut inside forest is found near trees.
Journey of winter has brought up dream,
For us this is a nice experience to feel,
Mystic appearance of sunlight falls on,
Railway tracks pierce through mountains.
We are walking but waiting for the train,
This rare train will arrive and go away,
Foggy weather identifies journey of winter,
This mountain is crown of victory of scene.
We are fortunate to observe mystical winter,
This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day,
To travel in eternal path of love and peace,
This season takes us frequently into trance.
© Kumarmani Mahakul,10 January 2018. All rights reserved.
Mystic journey on a misty morning is delightful indeed with figures fading in the distance.
We are fortunate to observe mystical winter, This beautiful paradise keeps this shiny day, To travel in eternal path of love and peace, This season takes us frequently into trance.- - - - -Beautiful depiction of winter season as well as life's journey to the ultimate goal.
Winter is very well depicted in each line. So marvelously written. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.
Well expressed and nicely composed. Thank you for sharing.
A beautiful prose poem that captures a fascinating train journey. A travel that allows you to see the beauty of nature brings happiness in our hearts. This is what is depicted in this wonderful piece of work. Very well presented and beautifully crafted.10++++
Such railway lines! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
a wonderful poem of the magic that surrounds us all of the time? .............well written Kumarmani
A journey of love and peace seen through the beauty of winter. the message is pleasantly imparted to the readers. Thank you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How nice! Isn't it great that we still have trains? I would always prefer them to a car or airplane as it gives me more time to connect with eternal path of love and peace. Loved the sending to nature's beauty blessings, thank you for share.