Tuesday, April 8, 2025

With Yr Absence Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's nothing--but emptiness
With yr absence
The bed is too big
And only I can dream
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
COMMENTS
Smoky Hoss 12 March 2026

The bed is too big, the dreams too deep, the absence too dark. Yet, lay there and dream on, the light awaits, perhaps not near, yet, but still light remains.

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Belle Wassermeister 12 July 2025

I miss you, LeeAnn! Is your account 'disabled' like so many others? Why does PH lock out faithful members?

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Richard Wlodarski 21 January 2026

Belle, it took me over 6 months to get locked 'in' again. Looking forward to reading some more of your poetry.

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Nosheen Irfan 30 June 2025

Loneliness is terrible. So beautifully depicted! This short poem conveys the sense of loneliness so effortlessly.

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Aarzoo Mehek 17 June 2025

The emptiness, the void of the soul can't be filled. So beautifully expressed

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Rebecca Navarre 16 May 2025

Ever so heart felt! .. While beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 16 May 2025

It's ever so heartbreaking when all we can do is dream of our loved ones that we miss! ..

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Rob Lamberton 29 April 2025

I'm feeling your absence from PoemHunter these recent days LeeAnne Azzopardi!

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Rob Lamberton 23 April 2025

"And only I can dream Of you" …there is something comforting in being the only one to really know and understand someone else even when they are absent.

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2025

The longing, the passion, they are palpable!

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Belle Wassermeister 09 April 2025

Good work, LeeAnn!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2025

A very touching poem on love so beautifully expressed. We can feel the loneliness, LeeAnn!

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Nabakishore Dash 09 April 2025

Really when there is absence of whom u loved, only emptiness prevails all around.

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Puskar Sikdar 08 April 2025

Bunch of deep thoughts store in this short work. The desire says a lot. Great, carry on.

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Anjandev Roy 08 April 2025

Fantastic short work...... thank u..... LeeAnn....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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