dead..dead..sleepy mind..
The contemplation is my bed.
Prisoner bird..starving mind
..feed the mind with hot bread.
..(my mind is kid) ..
a sighing mind..a gasping bird..
free the bird..
revive the kid by feeding mind with hot bread..
hot bread..without bread
my mind is dead..my mind is dead..
This seems to suggest love or life with passion, and without it the voice is dead as dull in life. Words are beautifully expressed.
yeah, I also agree with you ma`am nice piece love the rhythm also thanks for a nice poem luwi
very true..agreed with your rich and realistic idea, , , so sweet is this one too... just go on and never stop writing... you are doing good job..10+++++++++
Your mind is fully awake Tamara, your poem is food for thought. Starve no more my dear there's more hot bread in the ovens[ mind, heart soul] Love you Poet friend Almedia
Food for thought: The mind is like a child that must be fed in order to survive. If you don't feed a child, it dies. If you don't nourish the mind with what it needs, it doesn't function like is should. Your poem is indeed 'mind' food. Thanks..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
food of mind is thought and without thoughts it surely dies