(((((((((Without Bread My Mind Is Dead))))))))) Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

(((((((((Without Bread My Mind Is Dead)))))))))

Rating: 3.2


dead..dead..sleepy mind..

The contemplation is my bed.

Prisoner bird..starving mind

..feed the mind with hot bread.

..(my mind is kid) ..

a sighing mind..a gasping bird..

free the bird..

revive the kid by feeding mind with hot bread..

hot bread..without bread
my mind is dead..my mind is dead..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Saqib 21 October 2009

food of mind is thought and without thoughts it surely dies

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Obinna Eruchie 16 October 2009

This seems to suggest love or life with passion, and without it the voice is dead as dull in life. Words are beautifully expressed.

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Luwi Habte 16 October 2009

yeah, I also agree with you ma`am nice piece love the rhythm also thanks for a nice poem luwi

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Dana Soumbouloglou 12 August 2009

Nice poem.. liked reading it

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Afzal Shauq 14 June 2009

very true..agreed with your rich and realistic idea, , , so sweet is this one too... just go on and never stop writing... you are doing good job..10+++++++++

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Brian Jani 04 July 2014

i too would die without bread.well penned my friend.

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John Shea 12 July 2013

Without bread you cannot buy the spread

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John Shea 21 June 2013

Without bread my friends said, , you are more slim they said...pup

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 16 April 2010

Your mind is fully awake Tamara, your poem is food for thought. Starve no more my dear there's more hot bread in the ovens[ mind, heart soul] Love you Poet friend Almedia

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Walterrean Salley 25 December 2009

Food for thought: The mind is like a child that must be fed in order to survive. If you don't feed a child, it dies. If you don't nourish the mind with what it needs, it doesn't function like is should. Your poem is indeed 'mind' food. Thanks..

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