You Are Someone (We Love) Poem by Unwritten Soul

You Are Someone (We Love)

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A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
Because we stuck in a time
Believing of something
We are no one, no one
Will we survive?
When few drops down
Will we survive?

Tell,
Tell everything you've felt
Living in a sweet dream as another
Dream to be just like him and her
Wake up as living nightmare as self
And well,
Everything in my words tell to stay
For you there is no life in others
To dream if we as him or her
We branded as someone else
Created in bigger dreams
Tell love, well loved

Wild hearts,
If we ever wear inside
Can be tamed too just control its flame
Too high! we maybe cant be that sparkling star
Just at the bottom of the world, but own gems inside
There always time for any seeds grow be trees
Life sound be same not by revolution
Change for chances
New brave hearts

A drop of tears
Flood all over the world
And we cant run but drown
Because we stuck in a time
Believing of something
We are no one, no one
Will we survive?
When few drops down
Will we survive?

Yes, we could be

I maybe not a ship to float
Not wish to be a survivor mermaid
But i could be a captain to sail with will
In this adventurous life, the way i order
As we dream not be someone we couldn't
Just be self, we are someone else
Trusted brand as ourselves
We re someone (somebody)
The precious one

Sunday, March 31, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem called 'You are someone (Weloveyou) ' is a poem that plead
people to love themselves as they are, no matter how you looked, living poor-rich, educated, troublesome as past, or maybe not good as other i just hope we remember each of us is a Brand life, what we need is to make the Brand not overshadow by others by giving out the best as we can and there was a time, when i was too lil i always wish to be someone else just because i afraid of thing and others already passed it..so i wished to be them not self, but when it's my turn...i told myself no matter what i own this and i cant be others so just prove that we are also just like them...maybe if our past is not great it never mean our future is black, not everything is closed for us, there always opportunities in anything happened so we must good to take this advantages to manipulate situation, never let situation manipulate us to be something that never help us at all. We live as ourselves now just once so if we giving up, what left for us? ? I believe who ever you are, we are the new brand to compete in life market, be creative and let fight to sell our voices in a good way(~_') _Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 04 April 2013

great poem just like as ever dear soul. this poem is telling the right tacts but let me add sth to it. sure its not true to be some one else but we may desire to take some one's position or what he or she has gained through his/her life.even to be better than them.it doesnt mean desire to be someone else, does it? I raise a question here. If we dont push ourselves how would we improve? kudos(hahah yes it s a chocolate for me, i swallowed it) ~nb

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Xelam Kan™ 11 April 2013

hats off.... for notes, not for poem your prose is more powerfull than your verse.... refine it....

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Shadow Girl 12 April 2013

Beautiful lil soul xxx

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 September 2017

This poem is strong in making ourselves one on tagging with love and affection above caste, creed and religion. We shoud be grown from seeds to trees. Dear madam you have so nicely inscribed this here. Let it be quoted... There always time for any seeds grow be trees Life sound be same not by revolution Change for chances New brave hearts Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 11 June 2017

Soul, this is brilliant. This makes me wonder how much more value there would be given by a person if that person were well treated as a fledgling being in this world. Sometimes that single tear can be as powerful as entire ocean. These words of your will last, Soul. A great poem.

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Unwritten Soul 12 June 2017

Another but not last thank you for you :) I know dear we are just human that sometimes feel lost, and its okay to fall...its not rare but common...i wish i could bring everyone happy and be fine with what life goes with us so far, past is never returned but future is always promising...if we believe, if we believe :)

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Simone Inez Harriman 04 December 2016

The value of self can take a lifetime to achieve and for some sadly not at all. Self worth gets a huge step up in life if we are loved and nurtured as children. I love your poem Soul...just beautiful! ...10

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Unwritten Soul 05 December 2016

Its been such a while not hear anything from you, thanks for your words again at least i know you are doing fine..Thanks for your encouraging words also..it is much appreciated dear Simone, stay happy and well...have a white holiday season there :) :) stay smile

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 June 2016

Will we survive? Yes! We will survive with positive works. Thanks for sharing.

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Heather Wilkins 25 July 2013

how can we love others if we do not love ourselves.? a wonderful powerful poem.

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