You Are The Top Story Of My Life Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

You Are The Top Story Of My Life



You are my soul and you are my wife
You are the top story of my life

You ride with me on love's joyride
You are my heart's enormous pride

You are the sweet smell of my soul
You help me to reach my high goal

You are the rhythm of my poetry
You are my life's sweetest reverie

You are the moon of my dark night
You are the joy of my eyesight

You are the music of my song
In your tender arms I belong

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jaya Mishra 05 December 2012

Very beautiful and touching dear poet..... You are the rhythm of my poetry You are my life's sweetest reverie.... Very beautiful...

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Alexis ... 05 December 2012

That was a beautiful poem. My favorite part was You are the rhythm of my poetry You are my life's sweetest reverie Although all of the lines were said with emotion, that one to me really set in what you were saying. Nice job!

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Rachel Dowd 05 December 2012

it's a great poem keep writing

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Josiah Decker 05 December 2012

I enjoyed reading this, you must love someone very dearly to get the inspiration for this beautiful poem. Great job, keep it up.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 05 December 2012

good rhythm and melody...nicely written...

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You are the music of my song In your tender arms I belong love that line! what a sweet poem.

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Hazel Durham 06 December 2012

Beautiful love with spellbinding lines creating a rich tapestry of romance that dances off the page!

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Maggie Munro 06 December 2012

Unshakeable, Asif, you always speak from the heart.

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Vipins Puthooran 05 December 2012

good melody and a top poem///

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Sallam Yassin 05 December 2012

a great appreciation of love and with whom u share the life your wife Great

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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