You're My Far Star Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

You're My Far Star

Rating: 5.0


far
the star
shining fair
in the vast sky
as if wink-less you
seeing clearly
my window
with the
moon



-February 11,2019 Chattogram

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Muzahidul Reza 13 February 2019

The far star is wll painted here,10, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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M Asim Nehal 12 February 2019

A brilliant poem, it speaks about the mystery of this life. Articulate writing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 February 2019

Wow a super cool sensational poem. Fine shape poetry, creative idea! I luv the moon so liked this lots. Kudos.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 February 2019

THAT IS NOT A STAR BUT THE OUTLINE OF A WOMAN'S XXXXXXXXXXXXXX UR POEMSAYS GOOD ONE MB

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2020

seeing clearly my window with the moon...The star and the moon and your shining eyes at the window. excellent dear Mahtab.tony

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2019

Stars and dream go together. Here star knows your heart. lovely expression.

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Jankovic Zoran 16 February 2019

The stars always hint at the moon. We just need to find the right one. Nice my friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 February 2019

Seeing clearly! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 14 February 2019

An amazing poetic expression of love and beauty..10.

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