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Rating: 5.0

Who is walking at orange-noon?
Is a person, a living bonsai or a tiny moon
putting on master color dress?

Old sky is sending soft melodies
A smoothening smell of perfume
is following behind
As a delighted pet shaking soft tail.

I'm moving on and on keeping zero distance

Entering silently into the
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, aryaindia 17 September 2008

Remarkable entry of soul's inner intent - As a laser ray like an invisible ghost! Just so beatiful. arya

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Kesav Easwaran 14 September 2008

good imaginative entry, Ashraf...10

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Mark Nwagwu 12 September 2008

you not only enter a person, Ashraful, you take their soul with you and bathe and nurture it do divine childhood. this is a marvellous poem - 10 from me. Mark

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Antonio Liao 11 September 2008

wow, what high a deep vision of imagery.....i like it... wonderful indeed.. when one wanted to enter in any game....event... relationship..even love... thank you....10/10... kept it on Ashraful

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Onelia Avelar 26 August 2008

Great imagery of this, Ashraful! I am glad that i 'entered' this... 'the orange moon' 'a living bonsai' I add it to my favorites.

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Brishti Mazumdar 08 June 2009

A smoothening smell of perfume is following behind As a delighted pet shaking soft tail. Wow...what an imagination! ...10++...as usual...Brishti

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 08 October 2008

IT SEEMS UR IMAGINATION TRANSCENDS THE BOUNDARIES OF THE HUMAN MIND...! ! ! : D

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Raj Nandy 29 September 2008

I loved the words and imagery used in this poem. -Raj Nandy

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Costa Anakiev 22 September 2008

good job, i feel the same things sometimes

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Mamta Agarwal 17 September 2008

this has a surrealistic mood, good imagery, very original poem10

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