Love is Eternal they always say
More than that is proved in a day,
It is wonderful to be in Love
Even the demure spirits rise above,
In Love a different world is sighted
All the evils thoughts are blighted,
The reflective senses come alive
Eyes, ears, smell, touch strongly derive,
The Eternal Nature dances around
The fancies, dreams, hope surround,
So, fill this world with the message of DOVE
Like Almighty’s everlasting ‘Unconditional’ LOVE
dear abha, your poem o'wonderful love is abeautiful nerration of love with deep insight of life.
What a beautifull description of the emotion Love brings, and how the enlightment can make all around us happy, Too bad we couldnt bottle this and the world would be a much happier place..... Excellent! !
To fall in love is a physical as well as mental feeling. This poem explains it well. As to the Almighty's role in it, this is well explained in 'The Divine Comedy' by Dante Alighieri.
Love and its multifaceted character is perhaps the most written about. It is difficult to write about this subject and keep yourself above cliche. You have done just that. You have breathed a fresh breath of life into this most 'dealt with' subject. Take care... Leonard
excellent, wonderful of worlds and rhyme.A very deep and sensuous message.
NICE USAGE OF RHYMES...AND U HAVE GIVEN OUT A WONDERFUL MESSAGE... :)
Abha, is one of the greatest of writers. Even though English is not her first language, she knows how to use the English words to their greatest effect when she puts them together. I admire her talent. GW62
love is one thing we cannot say i have no more. the more give, more your heart expands. lovely poem Abha mamta
In Love a different world is sighted All the evils thoughts are blighted, This is really true but how many of us want to feel that love only few of us who are very lucky on this earth and they really do their best for others. Everybody learns something but nobody wants to learn love because of lack of time. They are unlucky those who can not feel it. If they will start feeling then devil will make his way away from us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So simple words with perfect rhyme, rhythm and meter directly appeal the heart of the reader. It has its music too. Love has its multiple hues, In every hue there is new clue, It relieves the world from blues, The whole world does in love fuse.