With knees so wounded
unable to bend
from so much kneeling
on the splinter strewn
ordeal of existence,
with shoulders yoked between shafts
of dream and reality
and hoofs time bound
I lumber, plod, dragging
the waterlogged life-load of desire
across traceless tracks
of the vast desert of eternity.
10. 'A camel has 2 humps because a life is a struggle'. (a child 's joke)
No doubt it is a great poem with many qualities.It creates a metaphor regarding inner link between human and camel......
When one looses the desire, then finds true happiness and contentment with the life one has.
The load of desires and passions...existing as the water we 'drag' does, so often, cause us to plod through life. This verse is one of your finest, Yoonoos.
Of dream and reality! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Of the vast desert of eternity........fantastic write. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The waterlogged lifeload of desire Across traceless tracks Of the vast desert of infinity.//// What a truthful meaning! ! ! ! ! !