With knees so wounded
unable to bend
from so much kneeling
on the splinter strewn
ordeal of existence,
with shoulders yoked between shafts
of dream and reality
and hoofs time bound
I lumber, plod, dragging
the waterlogged life-load of desire
across traceless tracks
of the vast desert of eternity.
The waterlogged lifeload of desire Across traceless tracks Of the vast desert of infinity.//// What a truthful meaning! ! ! ! ! !
No doubt it is a great poem with many qualities.It creates a metaphor regarding inner link between human and camel......
It is a beautiful poem on life having touching expression and nice collocation. It is a great metaphor too.
The load of desires and passions...existing as the water we 'drag' does, so often, cause us to plod through life. This verse is one of your finest, Yoonoos.
Of dream and reality! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Of the vast desert of eternity........fantastic write. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
10. 'A camel has 2 humps because a life is a struggle'. (a child 's joke)