Time eternal, time translucent of light
Time in our hands
Who would believe
That we were once borne in a lifetime
All by itself and the many generations
That came after..
Time eternal as they say
Yes..there is always a time for us
But memories however vague
Still color our world of make believe
Reminiscent of an era not so long ago
Taken by light as another dimension
The wherefores, and henceforth
Man so solid in light
A time for us..time as you guessed
It is in our hands
Whether you open it
To welcome opportunities
Or when you close it to finalize matters
To stand and corrected
And be at peace with God.
Beautiful job. Very focused and eloquent. Sound, sense and rhythm are masterfully balanced.
This is an interesting piece of writing, time being such a complex thing. Each day a new gift for us to explore, and hopefully use well. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Irene *hug*
Man is finite even life on this earth giving one's best got to do it right in the eyes of God everyone has the chance!
I'm In awe of your divine beauty Your poetry sweep me away I'm so bless with you as a friend I love it 10++++++++++++++++++++
Yes there is a time for us...a time such as this. I feel your heart beat in these words. Time never stands still yet there is a time for us. Well done Meggie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful poem.wonderful idea voted10 surya