A Vision Evanescent Comments

This is a beautiful poem on Love and dream having haunting expression with nice collocation. The first two stanzas are the beginning of love. Fourth stanza expresses the feeling of love incisively. The concluding stanza is much impressive. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

Sweet memories! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Thinking and belief, is always a relief, it is personified, life is rectified, pains become dormant, and the end is pleasant.

A rapturous and divine visitation. Bookmarked!

I can completely relate to this, and I've had several dreams that pick me up only to bring me crashing down - just like this one. I've written about them in Beautiful Dream and Wondrous Daydreams, but nothing nearly as enrapturing and expressive as what you've done here. As always: Poema Perfecto ~Nika

God made this lovely lines like Meera to Him

Beautifully written Valsa you paint a lovely picture of a perfect love. You knocked upon my heart as a sweet memory what a beautiful line a definite ten

true poetry which can move anyone. its wonderfull.

Superb! ! Enthralling! Very well written with thoughts and feelings welling up beautifully, stanza by stanza. The full expression of love...why should that be just in a dream, trying to grope in the dark, only to find one touching emptiness?

Dreams are like bubbles.......Valsa......fading away when you are trying to grasp them......great imagery great write

Such is the moment when one experiences 'bliss.' A lovely write, Valsa.

sometimes i wish to read any short-story written by you, another of my favorite genre to read...your poems reflect the artistic impulses!

Fading like an evanescent bubble. Dreamlike feelings make life more interesting. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

An evanescent dream has here taken you to a higher world of profound semblances akin to the eternity of a believer's whims and man's dreams of the kind throw light on his remarkable imaginative flutter. Your poem is an exhortation for man's need to ponder over why he can't cherish dreams even gainst the backdrop of adversity and ordeals But the use of interjection of 'but alas' may better be done away with. A fine write, madam.

But Alas! With my senses lulled to sleep Leading me into a state of heavenly calm Through the window lying ajar You faded out like an evanescent dream! - - - - - - a beautiful end, and yet it pains a lot, when something good fades away as a dream, yet that unnatural glimpse of your loved one, fills you with temporal ectasy.........I can visualize, a lazy winter morning........ Dreams really take us to a world beyond all that''s natural, ...............yet my dear Valsa, be aware of mosquitoes! ...........I hope they don't ruin your astral journey! .........

dreams offer love in its most delightful color. thanks Valsa for this lovely poem.

moments of heavenly dream

fire of desire, desire is the root cause of all evil. It is necessary to be desire-less To enjoy life in right way.