Alliance Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Alliance

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to Mr. Ashraful Musaddeq, a poet friend at poemhunter)

What you need is
A bit of distinctive therapy
The kind that only
Love can provide

And you’re in luck
As November offers
A bundle of spoils and gifts
Could come as a promising alliance

(inspired by Kitaro’s Matsuri)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Carlos Abeti 16 November 2008

short and direct, like it.

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Fred Babbin 16 November 2008

The second verse is quite cryptic

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Thad Wilk 14 November 2008

A wonderful poem an' dedication, hope all comes true, in this revelation ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Reihaneh Jalalian 14 November 2008

it was really nice. your poem is great but you can be even a better poet. good luck

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hidden poet 14 November 2008

i wish i knew more about Ashraful Musaddeq so that i could give a useful tribute. i think it is beautiful though

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Subbaraman N V 15 May 2009

Yes; that is the nice alliance we all should enter into!

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Mamta Agarwal 03 December 2008

interesting, like your humour and style.

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Ric Bastasa 25 November 2008

'Air beriak tanda tak dalam.'

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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2008

This almost reads like a horoscope - but an interesting poem nonetheless. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 17 November 2008

short but interesting!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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