~~andrew's~~ First Steps Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

~~andrew's~~ First Steps

Rating: 5.0


Ten Toes..here he goes..
The right foot leads the other
Adventurous eyes fixed on his mother
Her caring voice echoing
Her open arms free of debts
Balancing his brave first steps
Ten Toes..here he goes..
The left foot fast to follow
Her baby to little boy, such a short time to swallow
With all those new places to explore
His mothers days now never a bore
Forever teasing by running away
With his mother always hot on his trail
Ten Toes..there he goes..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
totally disturbed 22 November 2008

children are such a blessing I thank god everyday for my daughter she's the best..

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Reshma Ramesh 05 November 2008

aweeeeeeee so sweet...loved this one....and it reminded me of my son

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*Trusting You* 31 October 2008

thats sooo cute! good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Aijaz Asif 21 September 2008

ten toes here he goes....lol, an excelent write...thanks

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Stacey Watts 08 September 2008

Oh I love this poem. It is excellent It plays on my mommy emotions.. Great job.

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Catrina Heart 19 January 2009

Awesome to pen the memories of a baby...so light and fun.10

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~Crazy Ann~ 13 January 2009

the first of many firsts time flies just remeber to act like them and take time to smell the roses right along with them and all the firsts will b remebered together.thanks for the smile.

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Awww...How cute! !

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jennifer hall 10 December 2008

awww...that is so cute

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**paris* forever forgotten** 09 December 2008

awww, that is adorable! love it.

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