Avant-Garde Poem by Sathya Narayana

In the history of the world, there comes a saviour to give a healing touch to the oppressed and untouchables.

An interesting poem, I hope Barak keeps his promises, well said, 10 Lynda xx

The first two lines rhyme. There are no more rhymes till the last verse. The last verse is good but needs a change. I do not prefer a mixture of rhyme and no rhyme. It should be one or the other. Otherwise, I find nothing negative. GW62

nice one, satyanarayana garu: you use some real tough words

Dear Sathya, no doubt your poem is well composed. I have nuance from your view, if we were people of ethics and would not discriminate between races, we should not mind about what some arrogant people say or do. I think the word 'hatred' should be abolished from poetry dictionaries. Very sure Obama is good man of white hand and sheer history, he is worth of great respect.

Dear sir, This poem sounded about humanity and as seeking hope in the obama's leadership

great write...tough, clever words. .talks about human dignity, equality, unity and brotherhood... sentiments fully expressed...written words of concern towards the rights of every race.. full of hopes towards humanity, eradicate racial discrimination... an inspiring piece for every man..... 10+++++

The poem does not talk about Obama. It actually talks about human dignity and equality. Good work.

Sathya, I loved the sentiments and the poem. I lived in SA through the hypocracy of apartheid to the freedom now enjoyed. Obama I feel gives hope to all honest thinking men and hopefully the world. 10/10

i love the last two lines the best.....good piece